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A by the book detective puts his career in jeopardy when he allows an unorthodox priest to punish a recently apprehended serial killer. (23)
A priest -- who is supposed to be celibate -- has 2 daughters???And it is not in the job definition of a priest to execute revenge on God's behalf. ?Never has been. ?In the bad ol' days of the Dark Ages, the church pronounced sentence on spiritual matters, but it left the execution of the sentence uRead more
A priest — who is supposed to be celibate — has 2 daughters???
And it is not in the job definition of a priest to execute revenge on God’s behalf. ?Never has been. ?In the bad ol’ days of the Dark Ages, the church pronounced sentence on spiritual matters, but it left the execution of the sentence up to temporal authorities.
Also, on the merely mundane level, ?the story sets up the situation for then detective then passes the baton, the action of the plot, to the priest. ?Who is the protagonist here? ?Who owns the plot? Who will carry the baton across the finish line to the FADE OUT: ?
See lessA renegade priest confesses to a detective the origin story of his uncanny ability to put “The Fear of God” into any man. (23)
Billy14, A logline is a description of a plot, and a plot is a sequence of events and actions taken towards a single goal. So, if you want some help with this logline, here are a few questions you'll need to answer before anyone here will be able to give you concrete advice about your logline: WhatRead more
Billy14,
A logline is a description of a plot, and a plot is a sequence of events and actions taken towards a single goal.
So, if you want some help with this logline, here are a few questions you’ll need to answer before anyone here will be able to give you concrete advice about your logline:
What is your MC’s flaw?
What is your MC’s inciting incident?
What is your MC’s main action?
What is your MC’s goal?
See lessThe Story about A detective who gets terribly injured during the operation, he goes to Coma. After a Month, he becomes conscious and he realizes that he gains a strange skill that he can contact to corpses that murdered.
Also, since space is at a ?premium concerning loglines, I suggest you drop "A story about..." and save a few words that can be better used elsewhere.
Also, since space is at a ?premium concerning loglines, I suggest you drop “A story about…” and save a few words that can be better used elsewhere.
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