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A renegade priest confesses to a detective the origin story of his uncanny ability to put “The Fear of God” into any man. (23)
Billy14, A logline is a description of a plot, and a plot is a sequence of events and actions taken towards a single goal. So, if you want some help with this logline, here are a few questions you'll need to answer before anyone here will be able to give you concrete advice about your logline: WhatRead more
Billy14,
A logline is a description of a plot, and a plot is a sequence of events and actions taken towards a single goal.
So, if you want some help with this logline, here are a few questions you’ll need to answer before anyone here will be able to give you concrete advice about your logline:
What is your MC’s flaw?
What is your MC’s inciting incident?
What is your MC’s main action?
What is your MC’s goal?
See lessThe Story about A detective who gets terribly injured during the operation, he goes to Coma. After a Month, he becomes conscious and he realizes that he gains a strange skill that he can contact to corpses that murdered.
Also, since space is at a ?premium concerning loglines, I suggest you drop "A story about..." and save a few words that can be better used elsewhere.
Also, since space is at a ?premium concerning loglines, I suggest you drop “A story about…” and save a few words that can be better used elsewhere.
See lessAn on the edge of your seat drama about an NYPD detective who falls in love with a woman; who?s brother is the head of a drug cartel and the detective?s partner gone bad, determined to end their romance.
1:? In a logline word count matters. This makes creating loglines good writing practice because you learn to write with the least amount of words possible. You will find yourself doing the same thing in your scripts as well, once you get the hang of it.Example: When he falls in love with= when he faRead more
1:? In a logline word count matters. This makes creating loglines good writing practice because you learn to write with the least amount of words possible. You will find yourself doing the same thing in your scripts as well, once you get the hang of it.
Example:
When he falls in love with= when he falls for
The head of a drug cartel = drug cartel kingpin
A woman, who’s brother is = the sister of
It’s just cutting a word here and a word there but after a while it becomes second nature.
2: Also you should give the detective a pro-active goal
“When he falls for the head of a drug cartel’s sister, a detective must…” (Then tell us what he must do)
Hope that helped, good luck with this
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