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An on the edge of your seat drama about an NYPD detective who falls in love with a woman; who?s brother is the head of a drug cartel and the detective?s partner gone bad, determined to end their romance.
1:? In a logline word count matters. This makes creating loglines good writing practice because you learn to write with the least amount of words possible. You will find yourself doing the same thing in your scripts as well, once you get the hang of it.Example: When he falls in love with= when he faRead more
1:? In a logline word count matters. This makes creating loglines good writing practice because you learn to write with the least amount of words possible. You will find yourself doing the same thing in your scripts as well, once you get the hang of it.
Example:
When he falls in love with= when he falls for
The head of a drug cartel = drug cartel kingpin
A woman, who’s brother is = the sister of
It’s just cutting a word here and a word there but after a while it becomes second nature.
2: Also you should give the detective a pro-active goal
“When he falls for the head of a drug cartel’s sister, a detective must…” (Then tell us what he must do)
Hope that helped, good luck with this
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The primary function of a logline is to describe a plot - actions taken towards a goal. The above describes a character but not actions and goals. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more details about logline conventions.
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Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more details about logline conventions.
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