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  1. Posted: May 17, 2017In: Crime

    Can?t find it, can?t fix it, he?s a cop, now he has to fix or he?s done so taking on an unsolved murder, not well-suited for, but it?s tied to his solution only he?s not prepared to face or overcome the haunting truth about himself or her.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on May 19, 2017 at 1:25 pm

    The primary function of a logline is to describe a plot - actions taken towards a goal. The above describes a character but not actions and goals. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more details about logline conventions.

    The primary function of a logline is to describe a plot – actions taken towards a goal. The above describes a character but not actions and goals.

    Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more details about logline conventions.

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  2. Posted: May 11, 2017In: Crime

    On returning to work from maternity leave, a journalist discovers her children?s carer is the daughter of a woman controversially convicted of murder in the last trial she covered.

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    Added an answer on May 12, 2017 at 9:46 am

    You can drop the part about returning to work after maternity leave. The story begins when she hires the new babysitter.

    You can drop the part about returning to work after maternity leave. The story begins when she hires the new babysitter.

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  3. Posted: April 30, 2017In: Crime

    After witnessing the murder of her student, a teacher is forced to work with an off-grid agency to stop an underground terror division.

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    Added an answer on May 2, 2017 at 11:19 am

    Focus on her merit, not socio-political agenda. Marine gone art teacher sounds interesting to me, however, Marine can mean several things - was she an infantry trooper on the front line? An office clerk on a base? What was her specific expertise? As an Ex military myself, I find it surprising how brRead more

    Focus on her merit, not socio-political agenda.
    Marine gone art teacher sounds interesting to me, however, Marine can mean several things – was she an infantry trooper on the front line? An office clerk on a base? What was her specific expertise?

    As an Ex military myself, I find it surprising how broad a scope the term ‘soldier’ covers for most people.

    Use her expertise as a key into her being recruited to work for this off-grid agency. Lastly, best to give her a long-term goal for the series as a whole, which means what is it she wants to achieve by the end of season one.

    For example:
    After witnessing a student’s murder, a marine sniper gone art teacher must join an off grid agency to prevent a terror cell from targeting students around the country.

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