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A once-promising boxer turns to highline crime to save his cancer-stricken mother. But when an Aryan Brotherhood kingpin threatens the mother of his unborn child, he must confront the demons of his past – even if it means paying the ultimate price.
Agreed with Richiev and DPG. Also, the structure of the logline should emulate the structure of the story. Currently, it starts with "...A once-promising boxer turns to highline crime...", but this happens well into the story, not at the very beginning of it. Point is, describe the events in the logRead more
Agreed with Richiev and DPG.
Also, the structure of the logline should emulate the structure of the story. Currently, it starts with “…A once-promising boxer turns to highline crime…”, but this happens well into the story, not at the very beginning of it. Point is, describe the events in the logline in the same order they play out in the story, i.e: After a kingpin threatens his wife, a once promising boxer must…
See lessWhen an elder crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss, at a poker game, he must carefully find a way to avoid a gang war and keep everyone at the game calm.
Like Eethan, I can see the poker game as the setup for a plot. ?Either the protagonist maintains the peace or he doesn't. ?If he maintains the peace,?what's there left to fight about, what's the conflict driving the story? ?If he doesn't, what happens next? ?What becomes the dramatic action that driRead more
Like Eethan, I can see the poker game as the setup for a plot. ?Either the protagonist maintains the peace or he doesn’t. ?If he maintains the peace,?what’s there left to fight about, what’s the conflict driving the story? ?If he doesn’t, what happens next? ?What becomes the dramatic action that drives the rest of the plot? ?What becomes his objective goal?
Also, what particular ethnic group(s) constitute the competing gangs??
See lessObsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.
Got that,Bro.
Got that,Bro.
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