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An ambitious reporter determined to fast-track her career manipulates a masked vigilante to create her stories.
All great points for me to consider as I go back and rework this logline, especially with the intended direction of my story not coming across effectively. Thanks for your time and comments. It's greatly appreciated.
All great points for me to consider as I go back and rework this logline, especially with the intended direction of my story not coming across effectively. Thanks for your time and comments. It’s greatly appreciated.
See lessA drug-addicted thief hatches a plot to steal a cure from Big Pharma mercenaries when his mother?s chemo loses funding.
How about changing the order of events, as Richiev suggested, and specifying his action with more detail: After his mother's chemo therapy looses funding, a professional thief must break into a big Pharmaceutical company's central lab to steal enough of the drug to keep her alive until after his wedRead more
How about changing the order of events, as Richiev suggested, and specifying his action with more detail:
After his mother’s chemo therapy looses funding, a professional thief must break into a big Pharmaceutical company’s central lab to steal enough of the drug to keep her alive until after his wedding.
I tried adding in a time frame with the whole wedding thing.
See lessAfter completing prison term and reuniting with his loving wife a man wanted to choose the righteous path only to find his wife wants him to murder someone for the last time to bring her to justice.
As noted, ?the logline is vague and the man's motivation doesn't seem credible or compelling. ?Why does the wife need "justice"? ?And why would he agree to do it? (Just because she's his wife doesn't seem to be a sufficient reason.) ?What are the stakes for him? ?What does he stand to gain -- need tRead more
As noted, ?the logline is vague and the man’s motivation doesn’t seem credible or compelling. ?Why does the wife need “justice”? ?And why would he agree to do it? (Just because she’s his wife doesn’t seem to be a sufficient reason.) ?What are the stakes for him? ?What does he stand to gain — need to gain — by acceding to her demand?
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