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  1. Posted: September 30, 2015In: Crime

    When a man can?t afford to support his family he agrees to take part in a robbery with his friends in order to earn some much needed money.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 2, 2015 at 11:53 am

    As FFF said.??It seems like a generic situation used in so?many other films.? What plot arises from this situation that makes it?different, unique from all the others?

    As FFF said.??It seems like a generic situation used in so?many other films.? What plot arises from this situation that makes it?different, unique from all the others?

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  2. Posted: September 17, 2015In: Crime

    When a policeman is murdered by a bikie gang, a disguised woman tries to dispose of the body, but she must convince the drug addicted pilot of her crashed plane, to hide the body before they can be rescued.

    Leon Davis Logliner
    Added an answer on September 25, 2015 at 8:07 am

    Thanks for you thoughts. Trapped in the wreckage of a light plane, a disguised bikie moll must convince the drug effected pilot to hide the body of the dead cop she was transporting, before they are rescued.

    Thanks for you thoughts.
    Trapped in the wreckage of a light plane, a disguised bikie moll must convince the drug effected pilot to hide the body of the dead cop she was transporting, before they are rescued.

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  3. Posted: September 24, 2015In: Crime

    An insecure process server becomes the target of a serial killer and teams up with a private investigator to catch the killer and regains his self confidence.

    steveylang Samurai
    Added an answer on September 25, 2015 at 1:43 am

    Yes, I would get rid of the "regains his self-confidence" part, mainly because your description of the protagonist as "insecure" implies the inner journey he'll be taking anyway. Also, now you have room to describe the actual story more. Either why he is a target, or what kind of serial killer it isRead more

    Yes, I would get rid of the “regains his self-confidence” part, mainly because your description of the protagonist as “insecure” implies the inner journey he’ll be taking anyway.

    Also, now you have room to describe the actual story more. Either why he is a target, or what kind of serial killer it is (which might suggest why the protagonist is a target). You might also want to attach an adjective to the PI if there’s a buddy relationship that is explored. Maybe he’s hardened, volatile, disillusioned, risk-taking, whatever…

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