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  1. Posted: October 20, 2019In: Drama

    A young man smokes marijuana chronically for a decade despite disapproval from his parents, mainly because he enjoys its numbing and uplifting effects, which helps when you despise the state of the world.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 8, 2019 at 10:56 pm

    A young man, desperately numb, sets out to fix the world?s problems ? in order to feel something again. (18 words I think? Nice and lean.)

    A young man, desperately numb, sets out to fix the world?s problems ? in order to feel something again.

    (18 words I think? Nice and lean.)

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  2. Posted: April 28, 2019In: Drama

    A paranoid, schizophrenic man who loves all women does everything in his power to please a dozen quirky and unique females, who may only be in a romantic relationship with him through his skewed perspective.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 8, 2019 at 4:16 pm

    I'm not sure what the story is, as the plot is unclear. What is the inciting event? What is his primary action? And most importantly, what is his specific goal?

    I’m not sure what the story is, as the plot is unclear.

    What is the inciting event? What is his primary action? And most importantly, what is his specific goal?

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  3. Posted: November 6, 2019In: Drama

    An ex-con trapped in an isolated house with the man who accidentally killed his wife – must pick a side when violent locals reach boiling point following a hit and run.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 6, 2019 at 6:15 am

    It's the dilemma that interests me...Kill an innocent man or defend a guilty one.In this version, Walt, a recluse, is actually guilty of killing Sam's wife in a car accident.Following this, Sam, a former soldier, his whole life goes off the rails...We first meet Sam after he's done time for accidentRead more

    It’s the dilemma that interests me…

    Kill an innocent man or defend a guilty one.

    In this version, Walt, a recluse, is actually guilty of killing Sam’s wife in a car accident.

    Following this, Sam, a former soldier, his whole life goes off the rails…

    We first meet Sam after he’s done time for accidentally killing an aggressive drunk in a bar fight.

    So… both cases of involuntary manslaughter.?

    Anyways – the structure is the same, Sam is out to potentially kill Walt. He then falls for his protective, loyal sister.

    A hit and run is the inciting incident here…

    In this version, Walt is a far empathetic character – like Sam his whole like devastated and then ruled by a single defining incident. In his case, he can hardly go outside.

    (Again, in this version, both incidents seem to be out of their hands. However – both men carry around a HUGE amount of doubt over what they did.)

    I’m keeping doubt as a theme.

    The death of Sam’s wife was a ripple effect that affected not only those two but the whole town around them.

    Similarly, the hit-and-run is an echo of that event – and creates a similar ripple effect. However, it’s one that escalates and brings out the worst in everyone…

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