1. Posted: October 5, 2022In:

    Young siblings have to use their very particular set of skills to counter bullying and alienation they’re experiencing after moving to a new country.

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    Hi pinang, I like your logline as it is. I believe you can make it even more appealing though by playing with the words. For example: "To counter bullying and alienation in the new country they've just relocated to, young siblings must use their very particular set of skills." I hope this helps GoodRead more

    Hi pinang,

    I like your logline as it is. I believe you can make it even more appealing though by playing with the words.
    For example:

    “To counter bullying and alienation in the new country they’ve just relocated to, young siblings must use their very particular set of skills.”

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2022In:

    When he discovers that he has supernatural powers, a security guard must figure out how to put them to use in order to become a real life superhero.

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    Hi dbengtsson501, How about: "To become a real-life superhero, a security guard must decipher how to put his newly acquired superhuman powers to use." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi dbengtsson501,

    How about:

    “To become a real-life superhero, a security guard must decipher how to put his newly acquired superhuman powers to use.”

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 18, 2022In:

    Ο ΕΧΘΡΟΣ ΜΟΥ, Ο ΚΑΛΥΤΕΡΟΣ ΜΟΥ ΦΙΛΟΣ

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    Hi giota1, I would have helped if it was in English. Good Luck

    Hi giota1,
    I would have helped if it was in English.
    Good Luck

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