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A poor farmer falls for a rich young woman in 1970s Ethiopia.
Hi tony18. A poor farmer falls for a rich young woman, BUT?
Hi tony18.
A poor farmer falls for a rich young woman, BUT?
See lessFollowing the death of her mentally ill father, a stalwart journalist feigns insanity to infiltrate a New York Asylum and expose the horrors within. Based on a true story.
This reads well. I can visualize the story just from reading your logline.
This reads well. I can visualize the story just from reading your logline.
See lessA chef discovers that her husband is in an affair with one of her co-workers.
I'm not one with a lot of experience, but I have spent the last four months hammering out hundreds of loglines using multiple logline formats for a screenplay I'm working on, so I've picked up on a few things. It seem you should make your protagonist a little more exotic to make them more attractiveRead more
I’m not one with a lot of experience, but I have spent the last four months hammering out hundreds of loglines using multiple logline formats for a screenplay I’m working on, so I’ve picked up on a few things.
See lessIt seem you should make your protagonist a little more exotic to make them more attractive to delve into. What kind of chef, where is she from, what is his expertise, or is he famous? i.e. (a recently married French chef has just opened her first restaurant and)…discovers that her husband is “having’ an affair with one of her co-workers.
Just an idea. Hope that helps!