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  1. Posted: June 26, 2024In: Drama

    A year into sobriety, a former addict struggles with the monotony of her new life, haunted by a demon from her past, as she searches for peace and self-acceptance.

    cmarch29 Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 11, 2024 at 11:32 pm

    The logline itself is clunky. The 'haunted by the demon from her past' does not fit where it currently is. It needs restructuring and trimming. Perhaps something like, "Haunted by past demons, a former addict struggles with the monotony of her new life."

    The logline itself is clunky. The ‘haunted by the demon from her past’ does not fit where it currently is. It needs restructuring and trimming. Perhaps something like, “Haunted by past demons, a former addict struggles with the monotony of her new life.”

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  2. Posted: April 21, 2024In: Drama

    Inspired by a true story set in the 1970s, Joey, a teenage introvert, meets Mandy, a free-spirited girl who becomes (his secret crush) before Joey can express his true feelings to Mandy. A tragic accident threatens to change everything forever.            

    Nick12 Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 5, 2024 at 9:15 am

    Before an introvert can express his feelings about his true love, a terrible accident occurs that threatens to change their lives forever, testing the limits of their relationship.

    Before an introvert can express his feelings about his true love, a terrible accident occurs that threatens to change their lives forever, testing the limits of their relationship.

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  3. Posted: May 25, 2024In: Drama

    Dr Goodman struggles with an ethical dilemma to misdiagnose a patient’s husband, because he’s falling for his wife.

    dogger Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 3, 2024 at 10:50 pm

    A doctor deliberately misdiagnoses a man's illness to guarantee his death after falling in love with the man's wife. (19 words) (With the exception of historical dramas, the general rule is to not tag a protagonist with a specific name. Rather identify him by his role in the plot.)

    A doctor deliberately misdiagnoses a man’s illness to guarantee his death after falling in love with the man’s wife. (19 words)

    (With the exception of historical dramas, the general rule is to not tag a protagonist with a specific name. Rather identify him by his role in the plot.)

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