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Forrester´s old Apartment is now a gang infested slum where Jamal has fallen on drunken times, and a genius savant gangster discovers the one man who can make his life wonderful – the famous Mr. Wallace.
I would recommend checking out the formula page. A logline needs to have three things: A character, an event, and an action. At the moment you just have a character. Based on your synopsis I'm imagining something like this: When a drunken man's apartment complex is overrun by gangsters he must fightRead more
I would recommend checking out the formula page. A logline needs to have three things: A character, an event, and an action. At the moment you just have a character.
Based on your synopsis I’m imagining something like this:
When a drunken man’s apartment complex is overrun by gangsters he must fight off his habits to take back what’s his.
See lessA former trouble maker, and a troubled group of his childhood friends gather for an extravagant treasure hunt and to solve years old issues. The best friend of a girl he bullied, tries her best to stop him.
Small question from my side, if at the beggining of the movie he is allready a former trouble maker what is the character learning in the movie? It will be better to point out the characteristic of the protagonist that will evolve during the story that the one that won't change.
Small question from my side, if at the beggining of the movie he is allready a former trouble maker what is the character learning in the movie? It will be better to point out the characteristic of the protagonist that will evolve during the story that the one that won’t change.
See lessOn the anniversary of her husband’s death a widower’s life outlook is called into question by the arrival of her husband’s blind friend.
What is her life outlook? Bleak? That would give a hint at why it's called into question. Also, maybe "challenged" is better than called into question. More action and conflict oriented. Is there a reason the friend is blind? Does that have bearing on the story? Is there a romantic correlation betweRead more
What is her life outlook? Bleak? That would give a hint at why it’s called into question. Also, maybe “challenged” is better than called into question. More action and conflict oriented.
Is there a reason the friend is blind? Does that have bearing on the story?
Is there a romantic correlation between the two? If so, I think hinting at that could also be good to get the audience interested.
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