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A free spirited young woman who likes to be barefoot tries to develop with a relationship with a middle aged man in his car.
Example: “A free-spirited young woman falls for a middle-aged executive when hitching a ride across the Golden Gate Bridge” Opposites attract but what is her goal? Consider the man interjecting a dilemma that tests it? Hope this helps, take care.
Example:
“A free-spirited young woman falls for a middle-aged executive when hitching a ride across the Golden Gate Bridge”
Opposites attract but what is her goal? Consider the man interjecting a dilemma that tests it?
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A small village boy, who is living a meaningless life, finds himself in a friendship with a mysterious dragon and embarks on a series of challenges from a sadistic entity to cement his place in life.
Consider the following: Formula: A [CHARACTER], must [do the ACTION/GOAL] when [a MAJOR EVENT occurs]. Example: “A simple village boy embarks on a [show don’t tell “series of challenges” that lead to a goal] with an enigmatic dragon when [a sadistic entity causes a MAJOR EVENT]” Hope this helps, makRead more
Consider the following:
Formula: A [CHARACTER], must [do the ACTION/GOAL] when [a MAJOR EVENT occurs].
Example:
“A simple village boy embarks on a [show don’t tell “series of challenges” that lead to a goal] with an enigmatic dragon when [a sadistic entity causes a MAJOR EVENT]”
Hope this helps, make this yours.
See lessA meteralistic business man enters THE TOWER which can only be entered at the bottom and existed at the top. He must quickly learn the rules of THE TOWER if he ever wants to see the outside world again.
A very important element is missing from this logline. That is, 'the lead character's goal' What does the businessman hope to achieve by entering the tower? And what event stets the story into motion? Here is a logline attempt, however, mine is a little long, and had to guess at some stuff, but I hoRead more
A very important element is missing from this logline. That is, ‘the lead character’s goal’
What does the businessman hope to achieve by entering the tower?
And what event stets the story into motion?
Here is a logline attempt, however, mine is a little long, and had to guess at some stuff, but I hope it helps:
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“When he discovers his business is about to go under, a materialistic businessman enters THE TOWER; a deadly seven-floor maze, if he succeeds, he will receive enough wealth to save his business, but if he fails he will lose out on all the things he is just now realizing are truly important.”