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When they discover the complications of moving in with two romantic partners, a thrill-seeking bartender must decide whether polyamory is for them, or risk losing both of their loves.
Dating in New York, eh? Logline is little long. You can get ride of "When they," right off the bat. Active voice -- "Discovering the complications of living with two romantic partners, a thrill-seeking bartender..." I understand the pronoun usage, but I am curious if it will be absorbed by someone rRead more
Dating in New York, eh? Logline is little long. You can get ride of “When they,” right off the bat. Active voice — “Discovering the complications of living with two romantic partners, a thrill-seeking bartender…” I understand the pronoun usage, but I am curious if it will be absorbed by someone reading it quick or be seen as a grammatical mistake. If you choose to tinker around, you can stil effectively write this without pronoun usage.
See lessA year into sobriety, a former addict struggles with the monotony of her new life, haunted by a demon from her past, as she searches for peace and self-acceptance.
The logline itself is clunky. The 'haunted by the demon from her past' does not fit where it currently is. It needs restructuring and trimming. Perhaps something like, "Haunted by past demons, a former addict struggles with the monotony of her new life."
The logline itself is clunky. The ‘haunted by the demon from her past’ does not fit where it currently is. It needs restructuring and trimming. Perhaps something like, “Haunted by past demons, a former addict struggles with the monotony of her new life.”
See lessInspired by a true story set in the 1970s, Joey, a teenage introvert, meets Mandy, a free-spirited girl who becomes (his secret crush) before Joey can express his true feelings to Mandy. A tragic accident threatens to change everything forever.
Before an introvert can express his feelings about his true love, a terrible accident occurs that threatens to change their lives forever, testing the limits of their relationship.
Before an introvert can express his feelings about his true love, a terrible accident occurs that threatens to change their lives forever, testing the limits of their relationship.
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