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  1. Posted: November 11, 2023In: Drama

    “A solitary chinese student gets lost one night during the end-of-year trip in Venice, encountering all kinds of nocturnal characters in a decadent suburb as he tries to find himself and his future.”

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on November 18, 2023 at 7:51 am

    You have described a character and a series of events but there are no dramatic developments and so you don't actually have a story.

    You have described a character and a series of events but there are no dramatic developments and so you don’t actually have a story.

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  2. Posted: October 30, 2023In: Drama

    When a single father attempts to recreate an idyllic childhood for his son through his beloved video game, a spark of rebellion from the boy compels him to face the harsh reality of their generational divide.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 3, 2023 at 12:53 am

    It's a great setup, but what does the father do with this newfound dilemma? As a father, this conjures up thoughts of me blowing the dust off my old Nintendo and gleefully showing its most famous games only to see my younglings say, "Meh" – what then? Based on your synopsis and the father's passion,Read more

    It’s a great setup, but what does the father do with this newfound dilemma? As a father, this conjures up thoughts of me blowing the dust off my old Nintendo and gleefully showing its most famous games only to see my younglings say, “Meh” – what then? Based on your synopsis and the father’s passion, I’m curious how he makes this bygone world come alive in his kiddo.

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  3. Posted: October 8, 2023In: Drama

    A young corporate suffers a breakdown that links him to a traditional religion that destroyed his culture. He must overcome an internal conflict and re-discover his spiritual faith so that his identity isn’t diminished forever.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on October 9, 2023 at 11:32 pm

    It's not clear what "breakdown that links him" means. Can you make things more specific, because I don't get what exactly is going on. "Internal conflict," "identity [is] diminished," etc are very vague terms.

    It’s not clear what “breakdown that links him” means. Can you make things more specific, because I don’t get what exactly is going on. “Internal conflict,” “identity [is] diminished,” etc are very vague terms.

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