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One lonely Filipino seafarer in a cruise ship finds comfort to his roommate who saves money to marry but he falls for him unexpectedly and as they sail together his feeling grows deeper until he’s force to reveal it
"Filipino seafarer" captures only the stereotype of nationality and occupation. This character is lonely. Why? If this were my logline I'd reflect more on character psychology. What might have made this character an individualist ... character being modelled of experience. Drama category? Or perhapsRead more
“Filipino seafarer” captures only the stereotype of nationality and occupation. This character is lonely. Why? If this were my logline I’d reflect more on character psychology. What might have made this character an individualist … character being modelled of experience.
Drama category? Or perhaps Romance? Ah, gender reference? Roommate equal’s girl/boy? Hard to otherwise visualise story events.
If this logline is romance, then plot structure would be two people desperate to be with each other …. but forever pulled apart. Think ‘When Harry met Sally’
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It's a solid plot. There's an interesting, smart protagonist. There's conflict. There's a lot at stake, although I think you can go farther than just talking about her position. That's not all she's fighting for. It's also a bit wordy. Maybe this? When a female engineer gets accidentally hired by aRead more
It’s a solid plot. There’s an interesting, smart protagonist. There’s conflict. There’s a lot at stake, although I think you can go farther than just talking about her position. That’s not all she’s fighting for. It’s also a bit wordy. Maybe this?
When a female engineer gets accidentally hired by a misogynistic manager, she must combat the company’s rampant sexism for the sake of both her career and her dignity.
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Great logline. Looking forward to seeing it.
Great logline. Looking forward to seeing it.
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