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A bank manager invests 245 million dollars in an airport that does not exist, he must hunt down his scammers to save his bank from bankruptcy and going to jail.
I thinks that it would work better if you present the SCAM in a more precise way: for example, a bank manager loses 245 million dollars in an elaborate scam of an unexistent airport and must track down his scammers to save his freedom.
I thinks that it would work better if you present the SCAM in a more precise way: for example, a bank manager loses 245 million dollars in an elaborate scam of an unexistent airport and must track down his scammers to save his freedom.
See lessWhen his father and brother died in a tunnel collapse, a mischievous young boy must take over the work in mines to survive life.
Why is the boy mischievous and what will or won’t happen to him if he doesn’t solve the problem. Why is he taking over the mine ? You haven’t explained any of this nor the stakes that raise his risk either way.
Why is the boy mischievous and what will or won’t happen to him if he doesn’t solve the problem. Why is he taking over the mine ? You haven’t explained any of this nor the stakes that raise his risk either way.
See lessWhen a little girls father kills her mother before killing himself, she must convince her Sunday school teacher that she has seen GOD
If you give us a 'must', you must give us an 'or else'; or else the logline will seem incomplete"After the murder-suicide of her parents, a traumatized girl must convince her Sunday school teacher she has seen God, or else..." (This bad thing will happen)
If you give us a ‘must’, you must give us an ‘or else’; or else the logline will seem incomplete
“After the murder-suicide of her parents, a traumatized girl must convince her Sunday school teacher she has seen God, or else…” (This bad thing will happen)
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