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A talented lonely man falls in love with his soulmate but everyday fighting brings out her past and his imaginary future.
I'm assuming" her past" means she had a traumatic past? Is that the conflict. Because of her past they can't achieve the future he has envisaged? If this is the case then maybe it's her story. She needs to overcome her fears for them to be happy.
I’m assuming” her past” means she had a traumatic past? Is that the conflict. Because of her past they can’t achieve the future he has envisaged? If this is the case then maybe it’s her story. She needs to overcome her fears for them to be happy.
See lessPost suicide attempt, an intensely self-analytical young woman stumbles through the reality of living when she expected to be dead, whilst wryly reflecting on how her time in a military academy led her there.
It sounds interesting mlenyesoe, but a couple of questions please: Did she attempt suicide while she was in the academy? Her being in a war is not in your logline, so it sounds like the academy broke her? What would we watch for the majority of your script? This is what I can ?see? so far: ACT 1: ShRead more
It sounds interesting mlenyesoe, but a couple of questions please:
This is what I can ?see? so far:
ACT 1: She is in trouble > She attempts suicide > She contemplates about what led her to that point.
ACT II: What?s next? As you can see ?stumbles through the reality of living? is vague.
Hope this helps.
See lessWhen a suicidal FBI agent is assigned to infiltrate a prison drug ring, his life is saved by two lifers and a bond forms, however, his new friendships soon thwart his mission.
What if: Instead of suicidal ? the FBI agent was a powder keg or loose cannon? Like Mel Gibson's character in ?Lethal Weapon?. He is known in the agency as the only one who can pull this off. I have not seen crazy cop in a while and miss it ? The reason why he is crazy? He is hooked on ?super buff?Read more
What if:
Instead of suicidal ? the FBI agent was a powder keg or loose cannon? Like Mel Gibson’s character in ?Lethal Weapon?. He is known in the agency as the only one who can pull this off. I have not seen crazy cop in a while and miss it ?
The reason why he is crazy? He is hooked on ?super buff? or whatever name you want to call the drug this ring is pushing. So, I reversed your plot, he is infiltrating to take control of the US operations for this drug, a bond is still formed with the two lifers – but they are there to stop him.
Take care.
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