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When a troubled mother is suddenly widowed and a father?s affair comes to light, devastating secrets slowly unravel, but her dysfunctional family are quick to break.
Based on your response to Odie, I think you should try and incorporate the way the husband died seeing as it's integral to the twist: after an unexpected suicide, a troubled mother...
Based on your response to Odie, I think you should try and incorporate the way the husband died seeing as it’s integral to the twist: after an unexpected suicide, a troubled mother…
See lessWhen a young homeless woman is confronted by an evil older male blackmailer, who holds the key to her secret, she must choose between her dignity and a roof over her head. (this is for a scene, but I’m requested to submit a logline for it).
Posted this in the other one...A woman trying to get her life back on track is blackmailed into sex by a man who threatens to inform her shelter and care program about her secret drug habit.Idea - could make her counsellor the sex predator??So what's it about? A woman regaining control over her lifeRead more
Posted this in the other one…
A woman trying to get her life back on track is blackmailed into sex by a man who threatens to inform her shelter and care program about her secret drug habit.
Idea – could make her counsellor the sex predator??
So what’s it about? A woman regaining control over her life in more ways than one.
See lessA man blackmails a young woman he?ll inform the shelter and care program about her ongoing drug habit, leaving her homeless, unless she becomes his mistress.
INTENTION: to blackmail a woman into becoming his mistress.OBSTACLE: ?I think this might work better from the woman?s angle. Let?s try it out?INTENTION: get clean? get her life back together?OBSTACLE: her drug habit - which is ruining her life in more ways than one.A woman trying to get life back toRead more
INTENTION: to blackmail a woman into becoming his mistress.
OBSTACLE: ?
I think this might work better from the woman?s angle. Let?s try it out?
INTENTION: get clean? get her life back together?
OBSTACLE: her drug habit – which is ruining her life in more ways than one.
A woman trying to get life back together is blackmailed into sex by a man who threatens to inform her shelter and care program about her secret drug habit.
I dunno?
What do you think is the obstacle from the man?s angle? What?s standing in his way??
Intention and obstacle both need to be strong and specific.
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