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Losing his eyesight gradually due to a rare disease, an introverted painter hurries to finish his last painting to participate in an important exhibition going trough an existential crisis.
This is a really nice premise.So we get the stakes, could you make the exhibition something specific? Like a major biennale for example.The only other note I'll make is that it's not cinematic. Nice premise but ultimately, some guy painting doesn't make for good cinema. Could you inject a conflict?Read more
This is a really nice premise.
So we get the stakes, could you make the exhibition something specific? Like a major biennale for example.
The only other note I’ll make is that it’s not cinematic. Nice premise but ultimately, some guy painting doesn’t make for good cinema. Could you inject a conflict? Perhaps he has to reconcile with his estranged son, daughter, or wife. What if the estranged loved one is the only person he knows/trusts to be his hands and help him finish the painting?
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It sounds interesting but I'm not clear why the one with the good heart would give it up. Some options to consider: What is the inciting incident? Perhaps it can start from when the heart transplant happens Maybe have a heart donation available from a third party but only one can get it so it becomeRead more
It sounds interesting but I’m not clear why the one with the good heart would give it up.
Some options to consider:
What is the inciting incident? Perhaps it can start from when the heart transplant happens
Maybe have a heart donation available from a third party but only one can get it so it becomes a legal case. What are the stakes/consequences?
Perhaps the artist is brain dead but has his heart functioning thus donating his heart to the lawyer.
What is your theme? Where is it going?
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Thank you so much.
Thank you so much.
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