1. Posted: April 6, 2020In:

    An alluring Irish banker who is terminally ill must race against time to convince her ex-boyfriend and American baseball star that her 10-year-old daughter is his.

    dpg Singularity

    Why? So she convinces him, then what?? What is her end-of-life, end game, her ultimate objective?? Isn't it to get the guy to adopt her? These days it's relatively easy to establish paternity by a DNA test.? Even if he refuses to submit to a DNA test, she can covertly obtain a DNA sample by, say, saRead more

    Why? So she convinces him, then what?? What is her end-of-life, end game, her ultimate objective?? Isn’t it to get the guy to adopt her?

    These days it’s relatively easy to establish paternity by a DNA test.? Even if he refuses to submit to a DNA test, she can covertly obtain a DNA sample by, say, saliva on a cup or bottle the guy discards.? Cops do it all the time.? And being a banker, isn’t she rich enough to be able to hire a PI to do just that?

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2020In:

    When a young law clerk is pursued by the police because his senior partner has implicated him in a criminal enterprise he must embroil his boss in the crime to save himself.

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    Not sure a job is a good enough goal - if he loses his job, he'll get another one - not nice but not too bad, especially today when so many people are losing their jobs... Is there a stakes character you could bring in to the story?

    Not sure a job is a good enough goal – if he loses his job, he’ll get another one – not nice but not too bad, especially today when so many people are losing their jobs…

    Is there a stakes character you could bring in to the story?

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  3. Posted: April 2, 2020In:

    When a war veteran suffering PTSD goes on a rampage in the woods, his brother joins up with his friends to hunt him down – and must get to him first before the others kill him.

    thedarkhorse Samurai

    Also - the working title for this was "KILL THE WICKED". I wanted to make you think about what exactly is "wicked". What is morally wrong. I think if I had to pick an overriding theme: I'd go with "a necessary evil". The pros and cons. That's a potent place. It's a universal idea - that unlike VietnRead more

    Also – the working title for this was “KILL THE WICKED”. I wanted to make you think about what exactly is “wicked”. What is morally wrong.

    I think if I had to pick an overriding theme: I’d go with “a necessary evil”. The pros and cons. That’s a potent place.

    It’s a universal idea – that unlike Vietnam, will never date.

    But yeah – I digress…

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