1. Posted: June 16, 2023In:

    When he discovers that his job is killing him, a shy kitchen hand must tell his sleazy boss that he needs to quit.

    djd2608 Penpusher

    Revised version: When he discovers that his job is killing him, a cowardly kitchenhand must muster the courage to tell his sleazy boss that he needs to quit.

    Revised version:

    When he discovers that his job is killing him, a cowardly kitchenhand must muster the courage to tell his sleazy boss that he needs to quit.

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  2. Posted: June 16, 2023In:

    When Katie’s distant father stays over to look after her, she must learn to reconnect with him in order to salvage their relationship.

    iiahere Penpusher

    Is there something in their way that might affect her goal?

    Is there something in their way that might affect her goal?

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  3. Posted: June 15, 2023In:

    A frightened young boy is confronted by a Nun to fight. Overwhelmed by her rough-house boxing lessons, he is forced to find his fighting spirit from within that he will carry for life.

    djd2608 Penpusher

    What does finding his fighting spirit within look like? And is the "that he will carry for life" part necessary?

    What does finding his fighting spirit within look like? And is the “that he will carry for life” part necessary?

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