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When a gigantic firestorm burns through a family’s horse ranch in October 2003, the miracles it leaves behind bring Grant, an accomplished physicist, to the brink of believing in something more powerful than science.
A logline should tell the reader who's the lead character, what they want, and what's standing in their way. Because I don't know what your lead character wants, it's difficult to tell what the story is about. I can see it has something to do with magic apples, but not sure what the magic apples doRead more
A logline should tell the reader who’s the lead character, what they want, and what’s standing in their way.
Because I don’t know what your lead character wants, it’s difficult to tell what the story is about.
I can see it has something to do with magic apples, but not sure what the magic apples do nor what the lead character plans on doing with the magic apples now that he has them.
Anyway, this is just a critique of the logline, not the story itself.
See lessAn animal-hating animal control officer wakes up as a stray dog and must find a way to turn back but when he’s impounded and scheduled to be put down he instigates a jailbreak to save himself and the other end-of-lifers
Since this is a family show, I ran your logline past my 11 years old – he was not a fan of “hating”, also “officer” and "instigate" threw him off the story. So, I familied it up – picture my kid reading your movie blurb at the Redbox ;)A diabolical dog catcher is transformed into a mutt and sets oRead more
Since this is a family show, I ran your logline past my 11 years old – he was not a fan of “hating”, also “officer” and “instigate” threw him off the story. So, I familied it up – picture my kid reading your movie blurb at the Redbox 😉
A diabolical dog catcher is transformed into a mutt and sets out on a mission to reverse the curse but when he’s caught and impounded he must bust out with his buddies in danger to complete the mission
Fun stuff Mike – take care..
See lessA con artist hustles a family into spending Christmas with him, but his masquerade is threatened when his real family moves in next door
Why does the con artist hustle a family into spending Christmas with him when he can spend it with his real family?
Why does the con artist hustle a family into spending Christmas with him when he can spend it with his real family?
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