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? A hypochondriac TV host on the brink of failure must confront his troubled past when the only way to save his show is to go on a road trip with his estranged biological sister to find their birth mother.
I agree with? Richiev.? ?If a logline has more than one sentence, then the logline is probably too long.The more measure for me is a logline that exceeds 40 words. (I have yet to encounter a logline for a movie that got made that couldn't be summarized in 40 words or less.)? That is, a logline shoulRead more
I agree with? Richiev.? ?If a logline has more than one sentence, then the logline is probably too long.
The more measure for me is a logline that exceeds 40 words. (I have yet to encounter a logline for a movie that got made that couldn’t be summarized in 40 words or less.)? That is, a logline should only take 5-6 seconds to read.? And it should make immediate sense.
This logline is 39 words long — almost at the red line.? However, imho, it doesn’t make immediate sense in terms of stating the singular, clearly defined objective goal of the protagonist that drives the action.
See lessWhen Mrs. Claus walks out on Santa with four weeks to go, the workaholic chief elf must find a way to deliver Christmas on time with or without its figurehead.
Maybe this is more in the right direction -------------------------------------------------- "When a depressed Santa refuses to get out of bed after Mrs. Claus leaves him, it's up to a Christmaholic elf to make sure Christmas doesn't fail."
Maybe this is more in the right direction
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“When a depressed Santa refuses to get out of bed after Mrs. Claus leaves him, it’s up to a Christmaholic elf to make sure Christmas doesn’t fail.”
See lessWhen 3 fatherless girls discover that their favorite pop-star is performing at their school?s father-daughter-only dance, they set out on a crazy mission to find 3 stand-in dads.
On a completely different note. This is just about story and not a logline thing.In one of the girl's quest to find a surrogate dad for the dance, should actually find her real father.But the real dad isn't the man she has built up in her head.This makes her realize how must her mom means to her.SoRead more
On a completely different note. This is just about story and not a logline thing.
In one of the girl’s quest to find a surrogate dad for the dance, should actually find her real father.
But the real dad isn’t the man she has built up in her head.
This makes her realize how must her mom means to her.
So she says ‘screw it’ and takes her mom to the father-daughter dance.
When the pesky ticket collecter at the dance points out, she can’t come in because she isn’t the dad.
See lessThe girl replies, “She’s my mom, my dad, and my best friends” and pushes right past the snotty ticket collector into the dance.