1. Posted: May 29, 2017In:

    Upon realizing that aging process has stopped, Nymph must continue living life using the ?psychological weapon? in order to keep her family and clone children safe and alive, while she is working together with a Demon ? making love means unleashing the weapon.

    jumeriot Logliner

    I agree with dpg, this is confusing in every way. Please check these and reword your logline so we can help you: https://loglines.org/howto/ https://loglines.org/how-to-write-loglines-1/

    I agree with dpg, this is confusing in every way.
    Please check these and reword your logline so we can help you:
    https://loglines.org/howto/
    https://loglines.org/how-to-write-loglines-1/

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  2. Posted: May 29, 2017In:

    A young girl possessed by a Demon, writes an epic in which she demonstrates the Demon as her God, Christ, because he is harmless and inspirational, both aiming at immortality, making her a clone child while she continues living life as it comes to her.

    Richiev Singularity

    Is there any action in your story which you can describe in your logline; or is the movie just about the lead writing her epic?

    Is there any action in your story which you can describe in your logline; or is the movie just about the lead writing her epic?

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  3. Posted: May 9, 2017In:

    A leaky dinghy and fearful speedboat must leave their quaint country bay to help a spoilt tender find her superyacht mothership before it embarks on a worldwide voyage.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    The only way I can see this working is animated. Lord Vader (Disney) rules the animation sector with extremely well thought out stories that appeal to wide audience ranges. You really need every aspect of your story ironed out almost flawlessly to compete. Good luck. We have Cars, etc... You can calRead more

    The only way I can see this working is animated. Lord Vader (Disney) rules the animation sector with extremely well thought out stories that appeal to wide audience ranges. You really need every aspect of your story ironed out almost flawlessly to compete. Good luck.

    We have Cars, etc…

    You can call this BOATS 🙂

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