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Short Film: An old black man living in a quiet retirement home finds a record player than, when used, makes the listener(s) young again..
Agreed with the above, the premise has some intrigue in it.Not sure how the MC being black is related though, is this set at a time before the civil rights movement? Does his skin colour present him with obstacles?Most good MCs have character flaws, does he have one?? And before anyone tries to jumpRead more
Agreed with the above, the premise has some intrigue in it.
Not sure how the MC being black is related though, is this set at a time before the civil rights movement? Does his skin colour present him with obstacles?
Most good MCs have character flaws, does he have one??
And before anyone tries to jump on a high horse, I am well aware that racism is, unfortunately, alive and well in many forms and against pretty much all skin colours nowadays.
See lessAll I’m asking is whether there is a specific reason for that description, as it doesn’t read like there is. Every word counts in a logline.
In a quaint country bay, a leaky dinghy and a fearful speedboat must help a spoilt tender find her superyacht mothership before it embarks on a worldwide voyage.
Could the speed boat and dinghy accidentally caused the tender to fall off or get separated from the superyacht? This way, their guilt could drive them to help out.
Could the speed boat and dinghy accidentally caused the tender to fall off or get separated from the superyacht? This way, their guilt could drive them to help out.
See lessA clerk at the age of 40, married and father of two kids realise his true passion for life and start to chase it along with fulfilling all his commitments and responsibilities.
You give us way to much back story at the beginning of the logline then don't give us the most important story element. What is his true passion? If his passion is for painting, He could set up a little studio in the basement and paint when he gets home from work and still keep all his commitments.Read more
You give us way to much back story at the beginning of the logline then don’t give us the most important story element. What is his true passion?
If his passion is for painting, He could set up a little studio in the basement and paint when he gets home from work and still keep all his commitments.
If his ?passion for being a rodeo clown, he could get injured and could cause conflict with his wife who wouldn’t want him to endanger himself.
If his passion for Surfing, it might mean he would have to uproot his family and move them to Hawaii, causing turmoil with the children who have to make new friends.
By telling us his passion, it gives us a glimpse of what troubles he may face.
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