Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
Born in the 70’s to a young and offbeat anti-war activist, a roubled woman recounts her spiraling descent into adulthood while baking an apple pie.
"her spiraling descent into adulthood": in my opinion the movie is hidden in this un-undertandable words. What happens in the movie? I like the idea that everything is a flashback while the main character is?baking an apple pie but this detail is irrilevant in the logline.Anyway, the logline has a gRead more
“her spiraling descent into adulthood”: in my opinion the movie is hidden in this un-undertandable words. What happens in the movie? I like the idea that everything is a flashback while the main character is?baking an apple pie but this detail is irrilevant in the logline.
Anyway, the logline has a good writing style.
See lessA troubled woman recounts her spiraling descent into adulthood while baking an apple pie.
There may be a plot here, an interesting one, but I don't see it ?- yet. Please checkout "Training" at the top of the web page for guidelines on how to construct an industry standard logline.
There may be a plot here, an interesting one, but I don’t see it ?- yet.
Please checkout “Training” at the top of the web page for guidelines on how to construct an industry standard logline.
See lessDuring the second year of a dictator?s reign in the Philippines where every Filipino wants him dead, he was murdered. The suspect: his 10-year-old son.
I agree with Richieve. I can't see the logic of the story the son recounts - he needs to kill his father to show the world he is a hero. It sounds as if the son is psychotic - a very bad trait for a hero to have and a tough one to handle as a writer. Consider the show Dexter, how much screen time anRead more
I agree with Richieve. I can’t see the logic of the story the son recounts – he needs to kill his father to show the world he is a hero. It sounds as if the son is psychotic – a very bad trait for a hero to have and a tough one to handle as a writer. Consider the show Dexter, how much screen time and story, was spent making a killer likable?
Secondly, as DPG pointed out, what is his goal? This is the most important question a logline must answer. Currently, according to your explanations, there is no goal the film will simply show the boy telling his side of the story and explaining his twisted logic. Best to re think this as a goal orientated plot and re draft.
See less