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Mystical demi-gods cruelly rule the land until a young child with supernatural powers defeats them one by one.
I take it from reading the logline that the lead character is a young child. How young, 3 or 4 years old? Just curious.
I take it from reading the logline that the lead character is a young child.
See lessHow young, 3 or 4 years old? Just curious.
Chosen by destiny, five teenage runaways entered to a parallel world. Empowered by mystical swords,they vow to protect the kingdom from the army of the underworld.
When writing a logline, it is good to figure out what sets the story in motion. What is the big event that changes the lead character(s) life? Let me try a logline from the perspective that traveling to a parallel world is that big event. "When they are transported to a magical realm under attack byRead more
When writing a logline, it is good to figure out what sets the story in motion. What is the big event that changes the lead character(s) life?
Let me try a logline from the perspective that traveling to a parallel world is that big event.
“When they are transported to a magical realm under attack by an underworld army, five runaways head to the call to protect the land with the help of a snarky magical sword.”
Obviously, I added the term ‘snarky’ to give the logline a little flavor.
Also, this logline could benefit from having a lead character.
Hope this helped.
See lessTeen brothers ALEX and STEVE enter the astonishing door of AZELDOOM, lead a mega war of three supernatural powers for entitled Castle, but finally get defeated by the Dragon Lord ZARDTH.
Like in "Narnia" what is the astonishing door? From the logline, they step through and lead a war, what is their quest?
Like in “Narnia” what is the astonishing door?
See lessFrom the logline, they step through and lead a war, what is their quest?