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Falion’s blind adherence to duty and honor and a curse that prevents him from ever touching another, isolate the half-blood in the backwater human village to which he was banished; but when undertaking a quest to avenge a murdered boy and rescue his lord’s daughter allows him to return home to his beloved Lumiden, city of the immortals, the tangle of lies and deceptions he uncovers shatters his ideals and forces him to sacrifice his true love, his honor, and everything he thought was sacred to save the life of his mortal enemy to avert a war that could devastate his world…and others.
Intriguing synopsis. Check out the “Formula” link in the header for logline structure help. The goal is to get your logline in an industry-standard state where we (readers) can provide constructive feedback.
Intriguing synopsis. Check out the “Formula” link in the header for logline structure help. The goal is to get your logline in an industry-standard state where we (readers) can provide constructive feedback.
See lessMystical demi-gods cruelly rule the land until a young child with supernatural powers defeats them one by one.
I take it from reading the logline that the lead character is a young child. How young, 3 or 4 years old? Just curious.
I take it from reading the logline that the lead character is a young child.
See lessHow young, 3 or 4 years old? Just curious.
Chosen by destiny, five teenage runaways entered to a parallel world. Empowered by mystical swords,they vow to protect the kingdom from the army of the underworld.
When writing a logline, it is good to figure out what sets the story in motion. What is the big event that changes the lead character(s) life? Let me try a logline from the perspective that traveling to a parallel world is that big event. "When they are transported to a magical realm under attack byRead more
When writing a logline, it is good to figure out what sets the story in motion. What is the big event that changes the lead character(s) life?
Let me try a logline from the perspective that traveling to a parallel world is that big event.
“When they are transported to a magical realm under attack by an underworld army, five runaways head to the call to protect the land with the help of a snarky magical sword.”
Obviously, I added the term ‘snarky’ to give the logline a little flavor.
Also, this logline could benefit from having a lead character.
Hope this helped.
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