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  1. Posted: January 26, 2021In: Fantasy

    “After summoning a ghost that they can’t get rid of, two young friends get pulled into a world of wizards, voodoo priestesses and working-class magic they never knew existed.”

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 27, 2021 at 1:32 am

    Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way?

    Who is the lead character?
    What is their goal?
    What is standing in their way?

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  2. Posted: January 17, 2021In: Fantasy

    While on assignment in Europe, a cut-throat US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but must quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies, determined to eliminate her and take the crown.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 18, 2021 at 12:26 pm

    I got more from the title than the logline. How about something like this? ------------------------------------------- "When she discovers the tree of life, an American journalist must use newly acquired Holy powers to protect the tree from the demonic forces who want the forbidden fruit for themselRead more

    I got more from the title than the logline.

    How about something like this?
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    “When she discovers the tree of life, an American journalist must use newly acquired Holy powers to protect the tree from the demonic forces who want the forbidden fruit for themselves.”

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2020In: Fantasy

    When a disgraced mermaid crown princess is banished to the human world, her kingdom is thrown into chaos as her wicked sisters scheme to fill the void and only she can stop them.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 30, 2020 at 3:07 am

    It’s a big ocean out there, added “Atlantis” to envision her home and showdown. Make this yours, leaning towards: “A banished mermaid princess must return to the sea in order to save Atlantis from her tyrannical sisters” Keep going, take care.

    It’s a big ocean out there, added “Atlantis” to envision her home and showdown.
    Make this yours, leaning towards:
    “A banished mermaid princess must return to the sea in order to save Atlantis from her tyrannical sisters”

    Keep going, take care.

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