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A young orphaned girl from a Forest tribe is magically transported to a medieval futuristic realm populated with talking Animals and Mythological creatures. She must confront her long lost father, the Vicious king in order to restore peace in the realm and bring him back home.
This is tough with so many concepts and agree with comments above. Here?s my best stab - Through a bit of magic, a girl journeys to a futuristic realm where she learns her father is its vicious king. She must kidnap the king to save the realm.
This is tough with so many concepts and agree with comments above. Here?s my best stab –
Through a bit of magic, a girl journeys to a futuristic realm where she learns her father is its vicious king. She must kidnap the king to save the realm.
See lessA single father/cat burglar needs to steal an ancient artifact in order to help his ailing son, grabs the attention of a 700-year-old warlord; now he must outwit CAIN to save the life of his kidnaped son.
What dpg said, plus If it isn't the biblical CAIN, you should drop the name. How does outwitting him looks on-screen?"After an evil guardian kidnaps his daughter for robbing his elixir, a cat burglar must rescue her before her sickness takes over"
What dpg said, plus If it isn’t the biblical CAIN, you should drop the name. How does outwitting him looks on-screen?
“After an evil guardian kidnaps his daughter for robbing his elixir, a cat burglar must rescue her before her sickness takes over”
See lessSingle father and cat burglar Greg Valdez steals an ancient artifact and must outwit a 700-year-old madman to save the life of his son.
Yep, don't leave readers guessing, having to read twice, three times to figure out what the story is.? A logline has? one? window of opportunity, 10-12 seconds, to pitch the plot, set the story hook.? There are no second chances.? A reader must immediately grasp what the story is about ,? immediatelRead more
Yep, don’t leave readers guessing, having to read twice, three times to figure out what the story is.? A logline has? one? window of opportunity, 10-12 seconds, to pitch the plot, set the story hook.? There are no second chances.? A reader must immediately grasp what the story is about ,? immediately get hooked.
An additional challenge in this logline is that the protagonist is a thief.? We may sympathize with his son for being an innocent victim.? But it will be hard to sympathize with the protagonist; the dramatic predicament is his fault.? His action has caused the fecal fury? that is inflicted upon his son.?
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