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  1. Posted: November 16, 2018In: Fantasy

    a young rain-maker must quickly master her abilities to save the kingdom from the Ruler of storms

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on November 19, 2018 at 6:16 am

    I agree with all of the above. You are super close to having a solid logline -and I like the concept, too!"Mastering her abilities" sounds like she must sit down and study what she knows she has. I think the best examples of character growth come from discovering inner values the character does notRead more

    I agree with all of the above. You are super close to having a solid logline -and I like the concept, too!

    “Mastering her abilities” sounds like she must sit down and study what she knows she has. I think the best examples of character growth come from discovering inner values the character does not know they have.

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  2. Posted: November 6, 2018In: Fantasy

    Revised (Round 2)- After a tragedy in London, Ohio, sends a dead soldier to the Veil World of the Supernatural, The soldier must stop a werewolf from entering the veil and destroying reality and exposing the supernatural to world, provoking chaos and destruction.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 7, 2018 at 4:34 pm

    If the soldier was transported to the veil world it would have to already be open, therefore, the warewolf doesn't need to open anything - it's already been done. OR am I missing something... Did the soldier find another way into the veil world? Sorry, I can't seem to get my head around the mechanisRead more

    If the soldier was transported to the veil world it would have to already be open, therefore, the warewolf doesn’t need to open anything – it’s already been done. OR am I missing something… Did the soldier find another way into the veil world? Sorry, I can’t seem to get my head around the mechanisms at play.

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  3. Posted: November 5, 2018In: Fantasy

    A strong teenage girl begins training at a unique academy to fight the Gods who are trying to kill her family and her.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 6, 2018 at 8:16 am

    What differentiates this from? Wonder Woman?

    What differentiates this from? Wonder Woman?

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