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  1. Posted: May 20, 2018In: Fantasy

    When a disillusioned married woman is absorbed by a surrealist painting, she struggles to develop the power to free herself from the painting before becoming part of it, while falling in love with a man of painting.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on May 22, 2018 at 6:22 pm

    The event that motivates her to take action is getting trapped in the painting, as a response to that, she needs to find a way back to reality - this makes sense. Therefore, the inclusion of the love story, in the context that you've established, is superfluous. What's the main story line in this coRead more

    The event that motivates her to take action is getting trapped in the painting, as a response to that, she needs to find a way back to reality – this makes sense. Therefore, the inclusion of the love story, in the context that you’ve established, is superfluous.

    What’s the main story line in this concept? The love story? Or her getting back to reality?

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  2. Posted: May 19, 2018In: Fantasy

    When a disillusioned married woman is absorbed by a surrealist painting, she struggles to develop the power to free herself from the painting before becoming part of it, while falling in love with a man of painting.

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    etatsecond Logliner
    Added an answer on May 20, 2018 at 7:29 am

    I don't know what happened but here is the original logline before my correction: In an exhibition, after a woman enters a painting, her boyfriend must look for the painter before he leaving the exhibition.?

    I don’t know what happened but here is the original logline before my correction:

    In an exhibition, after a woman enters a painting, her boyfriend must look for the painter before he leaving the exhibition.?

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2018In: Fantasy

    An academic must work with a Romanian deity to uncover ancient knowledge, in order to stop his brother-god from unleashing a second life-ending flood. (Urban Fantasy)

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 11, 2018 at 9:18 pm

    As the others have said.And if he's a god why does he need the help of a mere mortal?? Why can't he -- why doesn't he just do the job himself?? Isn't that the whole point of having gods in stories -- because they can do things humans can't?? So why doesn't the deity do the research himself??fwiw

    As the others have said.

    And if he’s a god why does he need the help of a mere mortal?? Why can’t he — why doesn’t he just do the job himself?? Isn’t that the whole point of having gods in stories — because they can do things humans can’t?? So why doesn’t the deity do the research himself??

    fwiw

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