1. Posted: April 23, 2018In:

    After trying an anti aging cream, a 71 year old starts getting younger every morning and must seek its manufacturer to avoid dying…

    dpg Singularity

    variable:Come to think about it, I think it's a potentially cool concept.? It would be another story working off the primal wish of getting a 2nd chance to live one's life over,? to right the wrongs, to make better decisions.? And I would suggest her biological time clock should age -- or rather youRead more

    variable:

    Come to think about it, I think it’s a potentially cool concept.? It would be another story working off the primal wish of getting a 2nd chance to live one’s life over,? to right the wrongs, to make better decisions.? And I would suggest her biological time clock should age — or rather youth — backwards one day at a time.? However, the world doesn’t.? It keeps moving forward in time.? Which presents interesting choices she has to make.

    But I fear that the 1st reaction of most movie makers will be what mine was, “Oh,? that was already done with ‘Benjamin Button’.” So I think the logline (as well as the script) needs not only a different inciting incident (which you’ve got ) but a more interesting objective goal than finding the manufacturer.? I think her objective goal should be to seize the opportunity to live the life she always wanted to live but didn’t have the guts to live.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: April 22, 2018In:

    After accidentally reviving a teenage MUMMY, a young archaeologist must fight the freed DARK FORCES who want the MUMMY to turn evil and cause annihilation.

    Jessie Samurai

    Just making this a separate post to make it searchable. Regarding a character being emotionally detached. Yes, there are real people like that. But:Even in pure action movies, in the best ones, the character cares. They don?t have to wear it on their sleeves, but they do. I?m not saying, make it a lRead more

    Just making this a separate post to make it searchable. Regarding a character being emotionally detached. Yes, there are real people like that. But:

    Even in pure action movies, in the best ones, the character cares. They don?t have to wear it on their sleeves, but they do. I?m not saying, make it a love story. This is were you differentiate between a great movie, maybe a masterpiece and an ok movie, which could maybe attract audience with fancy action sequences and/or?cgi, although, audiences are finally asking for more there, too. The protagonist needs to have an inner life. At least one meaningful relationship. They must feel and care. Maybe not show it much, but care they must.

    Because why? You want the audience to care, go on an emotional journey. You want them to feel something. I mean other that woah, that was a cool action scene. Unless you?re fine with a detached audience.

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  3. Posted: April 20, 2018In:

    When planetary gods disagree on each other’s decisions of “universal laws”, An Earth God engages in a divine war against the biased laws for his claim in the new world

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    Jessie Samurai

    I am picturing epic battles with large armies of god-underlings. But I may be wrong. Would like a brief description of what a divine war looks like, too. Currently?imagining a?war-movie with added superpowers.

    I am picturing epic battles with large armies of god-underlings. But I may be wrong. Would like a brief description of what a divine war looks like, too. Currently?imagining a?war-movie with added superpowers.

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