1. Posted: February 5, 2018In:

    as the black plague threatens the world once more, two female werecats fighting to save humanity discover their forbidden love for one another.

    Richiev Singularity

    Guillerson is right, you should have a bad guy that is unleashing the black plague on humanity, an ancient arch-enemy of the Werecat?society, Then the lead and her friend can fight against the bad guy in order to stop him from unleashing the plague because you can't really fight against a plague. ThRead more

    Guillerson is right, you should have a bad guy that is unleashing the black plague on humanity, an ancient arch-enemy of the Werecat?society, Then the lead and her friend can fight against the bad guy in order to stop him from unleashing the plague because you can’t really fight against a plague.

    This could even be a cross between Buffy the Vampire Slayer?and Underworld. The Werecats have an ancient enemy who has been long dormant, they trained from childhood because of a prophecy that their enemy will return. Now it is happening and the fight begins.

    However, the lead character Werecat is also a normal sixteen-year-old girl who has a normal life and normal friends who know nothing about her and her families life as Werecats and there ancient war against their enemy

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  2. Posted: February 5, 2018In:

    A young female werecat discovers she is in love with her best friend while trying to prevent the end of the world.

    Richiev Singularity

    You should tell us the specific threat to the world Then tell us what the lead character must do to save the world And if possible give us a hint on how the lead being a werecat will help in achieving this goal. I think doing this will improve your logline

    You should tell us the specific threat to the world
    Then tell us what the lead character must do to save the world
    And if possible give us a hint on how the lead being a werecat will help in achieving this goal.

    I think doing this will improve your logline

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  3. Posted: February 1, 2018In:

    When a brutal warrior is blinded in a fight, he must go with the woman he tried to save to a magic river to get his eye sight healed before they?re both hunted by a cannibal tribe.

    dpg Singularity

    Good point by Guillerson. The notion of a role reversal relationship sound promising.? But why would she want to put her life in so much danger just so he can see again??What's in it for the woman? And who owns the plot?? Who is the protagonist,? the man or the woman?? (The woman, I hope.)

    Good point by Guillerson.

    The notion of a role reversal relationship sound promising.? But why would she want to put her life in so much danger just so he can see again??What’s in it for the woman?

    And who owns the plot?? Who is the protagonist,? the man or the woman?? (The woman, I hope.)

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