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In Portland, Oregon there is a house which for the last 130 years has served to maintain the link between two worlds: ours, and the world of The Wondrous. In this immersive, real-world adventure, six players will decide if Wonder is something worth saving.
Thanks for the help thus far. I'm posting here because I'm submitting my project for a story workshop.?The project is?a real-world adventure where groups of six? palyers interact with actors and puzzles inside a big house, and I need a logline for the application. I should have one anyway. This storRead more
Thanks for the help thus far. I’m posting here because I’m submitting my project for a story workshop.?The project is?a real-world adventure where groups of six? palyers interact with actors and puzzles inside a big house, and I need a logline for the application. I should have one anyway. This story is rolled out in the same way a narrative video game would. The players eventually become the central characters. Anyway, I’m rambling,?but?does anybody have a notion of how to create a logline that will describe the story while including the idea that there are players who have signed up to do the thing?
See lessA feisty female weretiger who just wants to hunt in peace, discovers a werecat trapped beneath the city, while realising that she is in love with her best friend Sally, as they team up with and unlikely ally to save the world from destruction.
Agreed with? DPG. Also, the MC descriptions are lacking. "...female..." adds nothing to the reader's understanding of what kind of person she is. What's her flaw? What is the problem she needs to overcome in order to become a better person?
Agreed with? DPG.
Also, the MC descriptions are lacking. “…female…” adds nothing to the reader’s understanding of what kind of person she is. What’s her flaw? What is the problem she needs to overcome in order to become a better person?
See lessfamous voodoo queen reincarnated with no recollection of who or what she is capable of. Her past lives assist her in discovering her true identity.
It would help if there was an antagonist. A reason why she 'must' discover who she is or else (This bad thing will happen)
It would help if there was an antagonist. A reason why she ‘must’ discover who she is or else (This bad thing will happen)
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