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famous voodoo queen reincarnated with no recollection of who or what she is capable of. Her past lives assist her in discovering her true identity.
It would help if there was an antagonist. A reason why she 'must' discover who she is or else (This bad thing will happen)
It would help if there was an antagonist. A reason why she ‘must’ discover who she is or else (This bad thing will happen)
See lessFalling in love while helping a cat woman return to her Earth alone leaves an insular college student struggling to maintain his belief in her and find a way through the gateway.
Rivercoon, All the previous comments to the older versions of the logline apply to the latest as well. You need higher stakes and cinematic actions/events.
Rivercoon,
All the previous comments to the older versions of the logline apply to the latest as well.
You need higher stakes and cinematic actions/events.
See lessWhen a village wizard is kidnapped by his power hungry brother, his accident-prone niece must learn to trust her abilities and save her uncle, before his energy is used to release a malevolent power.
Gabe,It's important to remember that it's the details of your story that will sell it, not the tropes. The imagery your concept evokes needs to be original yet in line with the genre requirements - that's what creates a 'hook'.I suggest you break your story down and see what about it is original witRead more
Gabe,
It’s important to remember that it’s the details of your story that will sell it, not the tropes. The imagery your concept evokes needs to be original yet in line with the genre requirements – that’s what creates a ‘hook’.
I suggest you break your story down and see what about it is original with in its genre and then how best to describe it visually.
What does “…power hungry…” mean? Or what does it look like??
See less“…trust her abilities…” what abilities? What can she do?
What does “…malevolent power…” look like? What can it do?