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After a shape shifter uses her powers to save the life of her best friend who was raped, she must confront and destroy the village witch doctor who controls the village.
thank you for your review, and yes it would?a journey for the shape shifter who has discovered that she can shift through a trumatic experience. Putting that in the logline and confining it to one sentence is quite a challenge, as I am definitely knew at this. ?This idea was born from a dream I hadRead more
thank you for your review, and yes it would?a journey for the shape shifter who has discovered that she can shift through a trumatic experience. Putting that in the logline and confining it to one sentence is quite a challenge, as I am definitely knew at this. ?This idea was born from a dream I had a few years ago and thought it would be interesting to see if I could turn it into a book. You have outlayed an excellent premise as to where my story can go. Thank you.
After a shape shifter discovers she has a transforming power when she saves ?her best friend from being raped, she must convince the village witch doctor who witnesses her conversion of her right to life before he issues orders to have the shape shifter killed.
See lessAfter a shape shifter saves the life of her best friend who was raped, she exposes herself to the village witch doctor who controls the village and is hellbent on destroying her.
You have given us the set-up to your story, The story would be what she must do about it. ------------------------------------------------ "When she exposes herself to the village witch doctor after using her powers to save ?her best friend, a shape shifter must..." (Escape? Confront? Destroy?) ----Read more
You have given us the set-up to your story, The story would be what she must do about it.
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“When she exposes herself to the village witch doctor after using her powers to save ?her best friend, a shape shifter must…” (Escape? Confront? Destroy?)
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This seems like a good idea for a story, hope this helped.
Two females of an ancient African tribe who morph into elephants save the life of a young girl but the village witch doctor sees them as abominations and issues their deaths.
I like Foxtrot25 's polish, but I ?am puzzled by the premise as a whole.The girls do something good -- and witch doctor wants to kill them. ?Why?I realize this is a fantasy. ?And fantasy has dramatic license to bend the rules. ?But once a rule has been bent, it must be consistently bent. Now then, bRead more
I like Foxtrot25 ‘s polish, but I ?am puzzled by the premise as a whole.
The girls do something good — and witch doctor wants to kill them. ?Why?
I realize this is a fantasy. ?And fantasy has dramatic license to bend the rules. ?But once a rule has been bent, it must be consistently bent. Now then, being able to shape shifter is pretty powerful mojo. ?So what credible threat does the witch doctor pose that they can’t fend off? ?If they can bend the rule, ?shape shift to save a village girl’s life, why can’t they likewise bend the rule and shape shift to save their own??
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