1. Posted: May 20, 2017In:

    A man with no combat magic potential, uses and abuses support magic in order to show how powerful it’s potential is.

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    "Combat Magic" ?can mean.... anything. ?The protagonist needs a specific magical ability or skill. (Like Rudolf: ?his only claim to fame,?the only thing he has going for him that makes him stand out from his peers is his aberrant nose. ?Not his antlers, not his hoofs -- his nose. )

    “Combat Magic” ?can mean…. anything. ?The protagonist needs a specific magical ability or skill.

    (Like Rudolf: ?his only claim to fame,?the only thing he has going for him that makes him stand out from his peers is his aberrant nose. ?Not his antlers, not his hoofs — his nose. )

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  2. Posted: April 13, 2017In:

    On the verge of a succession crisis, a good mermaid princess is banished from her kingdom to the human world for her forbidden love of humans; but when her two wicked sisters usurp their father’s throne and destroy each other in a power struggle to rule the kingdom alone, she must choose between humanity and saving her people from the tyranny of her sisters.

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    Agreed with all the above comments. Also, and this may be a wording issue, I'm not clear on who gets destroyed. Do the sisters kill the king and then destroy each other? Or do they destroy someone or something else in the process? Who is the MC needing to save her people from?

    Agreed with all the above comments.

    Also, and this may be a wording issue, I’m not clear on who gets destroyed. Do the sisters kill the king and then destroy each other? Or do they destroy someone or something else in the process? Who is the MC needing to save her people from?

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2017In:

    KNIGHTS of ASDERIN: THE DEMON KING’S RETURN – Upon falling into the world of his favorite game, a player running from his responsibilities joins a guild of adventurers on their quest, but when he accidentally releases the demon king from his ethereal prison, it is up to him and his new allies to defeat him.

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    In a strange way this is similar to Dorthy's story in The Wizard of Oz meets Tron - after falling into a fantasy world Dorothy motivates the wicked witch of the west into being the antagonist, in a way Dorothy created her own antagonist for her journey. In this concept, the world is a virtual/digitaRead more

    In a strange way this is similar to Dorthy’s story in The Wizard of Oz meets Tron – after falling into a fantasy world Dorothy motivates the wicked witch of the west into being the antagonist, in a way Dorothy created her own antagonist for her journey.
    In this concept, the world is a virtual/digital one and the wicked witch is a demon king.

    Dorothy had to follow the yellow brick road to find the all-powerful Wizard with her new found friends, same with Alan in Tron with the help of Tron they travel the vast digital expanse of the main frame to destroy Flyn’s evil programs.

    How does this concept provide the MC with allies and a journey to defeat the king?

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