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  1. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Fantasy

    After capturing a dragon, a young viking has to defy previous beliefs of the animal in order to protect his people from a much bigger threat.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 21, 2022 at 8:01 pm

    Hi EmelieN, Here's how I understood the story based on your proposed logline: "To protect his people against a more severe threat associated with a dragon he captured, a young Viking must ignore the superstitions and dangers that comes with the species." Use the above logline as a template if you thRead more

    Hi EmelieN,

    Here’s how I understood the story based on your proposed logline:

    “To protect his people against a more severe threat associated with a dragon he captured, a young Viking must ignore the superstitions and dangers that comes with the species.”

    Use the above logline as a template if you think I got your story right and rewrite your logline.
    I hope this helps.
    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 9, 2022In: Fantasy

    A high school debate student wanders into a magical poetic land and is forced on a grand adventure through classic poems to prepare to debate a gentlemanly Death and win or be doomed to marry him.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 11, 2022 at 7:49 pm

    Hi corpuschristicarol, Is this what you are trying to say in your logline? "A literature student who finds herself lost in the mystical land of poems with her opponent with whom she is compelled to go on a grand poetic adventure that prepares her for a chivalrous death or marry him." Including a shoRead more

    Hi corpuschristicarol,

    Is this what you are trying to say in your logline?

    “A literature student who finds herself lost in the mystical land of poems with her opponent with whom she is compelled to go on a grand poetic adventure that prepares her for a chivalrous death or marry him.”

    Including a short synopsis will help.
    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 5, 2022In: Fantasy

    When a town is attacked by a bunch of pirates, a young blacksmith must take help by a drunken pirate to save the love of his life.

    Gabriella Werkander Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 5, 2022 at 11:44 pm

    You capture the essence very beautifully, and I like that you realised Will Turner is the protagonist. The only thing I might add is that Elizabeth getting kidnapped is written into the pirate attack.

    You capture the essence very beautifully, and I like that you realised Will Turner is the protagonist. The only thing I might add is that Elizabeth getting kidnapped is written into the pirate attack.

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