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When a teenager discovers she can walk into the graffiti worlds beyond the walls, she accidentally wakes the shadows that her Dad trapped years ago and she must now find a way to save a city and her Dad.
TV is best pitched with the pilot episode. What happens in the pilot will tell the producers what they can expect in subsequent episodes, and informs them about tone, style and theme.A writer would be best served by developing a strong concept and a great pilot draft - another argument for focusingRead more
TV is best pitched with the pilot episode. What happens in the pilot will tell the producers what they can expect in subsequent episodes, and informs them about tone, style and theme.
A writer would be best served by developing a strong concept and a great pilot draft – another argument for focusing a logline on the pilot ep.
So what happens in the pilot?
What is the MC’s goal in that particular episode?
In addition to a strong pilot and providing you have a season long narrative, you could write a logline for season one to help in a pitch. Taking bits and pieces out of your draft above, the Mc is the teen girl and her goal is to save the city.
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After she accidently awakens a demonic monster her father trapped in a graffiti mural, a superstitious girl must travel into the world of the painting to defeat the creature and save her city.
When an orphan turned assassin in training disobeys killing her target, she is thrown into the lower ranks of the Assassin’s Guild, working as a servant, trying to work her way up only to discover her parents? killer walking the hallways and finding a record that showed her village?s demise was paid-for, not random and now she must find out the reason why her village was a target, and more importantly, who was responsible for it.
Agreed with the above. This is too long for a logline. Best you review the Training tab up top to understand what the critical components are of a logline. Here is, in short, the key points: Who is the main character? - clear MC description What does he or she want? - a goal. What is preventing themRead more
Agreed with the above.
This is too long for a logline. Best you review the Training tab up top to understand what the critical components are of a logline.
Here is, in short, the key points:
Who is the main character? – clear MC description
What does he or she want? – a goal.
What is preventing them from getting what they want? – an obstacle.
Answer ONLY the above questions in a single sentence, and we will be able to help you construct a logline from that.
See lessKeira, a warrior just shy of her sixteenth birthday, will have to survive the creatures of a world twisted by the DNA Wars, and hope her own mutation doesn’t degenerate further as she tries to reach the City of Lights where she will be free from persecution.
I think you have a very unique idea! Sounds like a rich conflict. I would agree with the comments above on what could help make this logline better.
I think you have a very unique idea! Sounds like a rich conflict. I would agree with the comments above on what could help make this logline better.
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