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An elderly man, lost in a giant maze is transformed into his younger self; but when he discovers his new world is also a slave trade; he must find the Maze Master who holds the key to freedom for all.
I presume GStar has already figured out the explanation for 1]what the maze is and 2]how the old man became lost in it. I myself would prefer a setup where the man's journey into the time maze is intentional rather than accidental. ?IOW: ?create an expectation gap. ?He dliberately enters the time poRead more
I presume GStar has already figured out the explanation for 1]what the maze is and 2]how the old man became lost in it.
I myself would prefer a setup where the man’s journey into the time maze is intentional rather than accidental. ?IOW: ?create an expectation gap. ?He dliberately enters the time portal expecting one result — a “fountain of youth effect” — emerges to discovers it works. ?Hurray!
And then the gotcha.
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As Nir Shelter said. ?The "extraordinary gift" is vague; it needs to be specific. ??And what is the inciting incident which ?leads her to realize she must use her "extraordinary gift"?
As Nir Shelter said. ?The “extraordinary gift” is vague; it needs to be specific. ??And what is the inciting incident which ?leads her to realize she must use her “extraordinary gift”?
See lessA young woman suffering from anxiety must partner with her arch enemy, in order to save her baby and subsequently, her world.
The cause of the anxiety can't just be all in her mind. ?It must have something to do with a real threat in the real world. ?What is the specific threat to herself, her baby, to her world that requires her to act? ?And as a result of the specific threat, what must she do? ?What is her objective goalRead more
The cause of the anxiety can’t just be all in her mind. ?It must have something to do with a real threat in the real world. ?What is the specific threat to herself, her baby, to her world that requires her to act? ?And as a result of the specific threat, what must she do? ?What is her objective goal?
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