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Two star-crossed lovers, one a wizard, and one a witch, fight to stay together while both of their families engage in a neverending war.
I can see something like this: With their families' being mortal enemies, two star-crossed lovers, a wizard, and a witch must ignore the rules and stay together. I hope this helps
I can see something like this:
With their families’ being mortal enemies, two star-crossed lovers, a wizard, and a witch must ignore the rules and stay together.
I hope this helps
See lessA boy must save the magic in an alternate universe or have his own universe destroyed.
There are a few elements that if added to the logline in a concise manner would improve it. 1 What is threatening to destroy our universe. (Or the lead character's universe) This will help us understand the overall problem and also the stakes. 2 You say 'a boy' but what special powers does the boy hRead more
There are a few elements that if added to the logline in a concise manner would improve it.
1 What is threatening to destroy our universe. (Or the lead character’s universe) This will help us understand the overall problem and also the stakes.
2 You say ‘a boy’ but what special powers does the boy have so that we will know why it must be him that goes on this quest… (And it must be done in a word or two) When a “magically adept” boy (For instance)
3 How do the two universes connect? If the threat is in this universe why must he go into a different universe to save it?
Anyway, I believe adding these specifics will help the logline as long as they don’t add too much to the overall word count.
See lessWhen an interdimensional rupture unravels reality, an unlikely hero must channel her newfound powers to fight bizarre and bewildering dangers from the multiverse as the fate of the world hangs in the balance.
What is the lead character's actual goal? Close the rift? Defeat the being that opened the rift (If there was one) Stop a specific monster from coming through the rift? In other words, what does winning look like on the screen?
What is the lead character’s actual goal?
Close the rift?
Defeat the being that opened the rift (If there was one)
Stop a specific monster from coming through the rift?
In other words, what does winning look like on the screen?
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