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A proud father loses his Crop Dusting business after 09/11 shutdowns, and addiction threatens his dignity; his only redemption may cost him his life as stealing his repoed plane could do more than break the bank.
Keep the logline to the main storyline: Also, you should add a face to the antagonist: When "This guy" shuts down his business, a crop duster and his wayward son must steal his plane from impound in order to stick it to the government and those who want to steal his freedom!"
Keep the logline to the main storyline:
Also, you should add a face to the antagonist:
When “This guy” shuts down his business, a crop duster and his wayward son must steal his plane from impound in order to stick it to the government and those who want to steal his freedom!”
See lessLongtime crook and materialist Tony Argleton is recruited by an FBI funded group to risk his life retrieving a priceless, golden mcguffin stolen by the ruthless Nickle Revolver crime family, in order to avoid any lawful punishment and change his image.
Thanks for providing a synopsis, here are my thoughts: 1. For FBI recruiting believability think about elevating his criminal stature. 2. Since 24K gold bills have a reputation of being a novelty, I amped yours up to priceless. 3. Spotlight these “ruthless mobsters” to make your premise unique. ExamRead more
Thanks for providing a synopsis, here are my thoughts:
1. For FBI recruiting believability think about elevating his criminal stature.
2. Since 24K gold bills have a reputation of being a novelty, I amped yours up to priceless.
3. Spotlight these “ruthless mobsters” to make your premise unique.
Example:
“An incarcerated master thief is recruited by the FBI to recover a priceless golden dollar from the Five Family syndicate in exchange for his freedom.”
I wish you the best in your endeavors and would love to see the feature, keep going!
See lessA regular 20-something year old woman is accidentally dragged in to a crime circle after she is mistaken for a professional hit(wo)man.
Interesting concept! What does she have to do after being dragged into a crime circle, what's the action?
Interesting concept! What does she have to do after being dragged into a crime circle, what’s the action?
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