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  1. Posted: July 11, 2025In: Historical

    After losing his royal security post when India gains independence, a disillusioned officer travels to Britain in search of a new life but becomes entangled in violent protests, political corruption, and the disappearance of the Prime Minister. As a secret organization pushes to seize control of the nation, he must choose between rescuing the kidnapped leader or stopping a rebellion that could change the country’s future

    Nick12 Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 19, 2025 at 3:08 pm

    Hey CG! Right now, your logline reads like this: A disgraced royal officer arrives in Britain seeking redemption, but becomes ensnared in a coup between a vanished Prime Minister and a secretive cabal, forcing him to confront his past and survive the instability. Kind of like London Has Fallen, TakeRead more

    Hey CG! Right now, your logline reads like this:

    A disgraced royal officer arrives in Britain seeking redemption, but becomes ensnared in a coup between a vanished Prime Minister and a secretive cabal, forcing him to confront his past and survive the instability.

    Kind of like London Has Fallen, Taken, John Wick, The Equalizer, etc.

    That said, movies like this are a dime a dozen in Hollywood. It’s going to be a difficult sell in an extremely challenging economy.

    Try to take this story in a new direction. Experiment with the setting, the characters, the backstory, the motivations, the theme, etc.

    Do a plot chart where take a piece of scrap paper or a Word Doc and just right the first thing that comes to mind. Don’t overthink it. Like maybe for the character you right the word “dog” and now try to tell the story through the eyes a member of the canine unit or something.

    Obviously, this is just an example, but basically try to find two or more seemingly unrelated things and see how they could work with this plot. Try to find a unique selling point that separates this from the rest of the pack.

    I hope this is helpful and hopefully not too discouraging! Just trying to be realistic. 🙂

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  2. Posted: December 6, 2023In: Historical

    When A financially and morally bankrupt government lawyer is assigned the case of a revolutionary who is keen to be hanged, he must fight against the british monarchy to defend him or lose his practise.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 13, 2023 at 6:03 am

    Leaning towards: When assigned a death penalty case, a financially and morally bankrupt government lawyer must overcome the British monarchy to defend a revolutionary or lose his practice.

    Leaning towards:

    When assigned a death penalty case, a financially and morally bankrupt government lawyer must overcome the British monarchy to defend a revolutionary or lose his practice.

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Historical

    When Ford wants to compete at the twenty-four-hour long race at Le Mans, a car designer must team up with a maverick race car driver in order to build a revolutionary car that can challenge and even beat Ferrari at the prestigious race.

    Rodallex Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 6, 2022 at 4:33 pm

    Good, but can maybe be tightened up. Maybe: When Ford decides to win the prestigious 24 hour race at Le Mans, a car designer must team up with a maverick race car driver to try to beat the legendary Ferrari team.

    Good, but can maybe be tightened up. Maybe:

    When Ford decides to win the prestigious 24 hour race at Le Mans, a car designer must team up with a maverick race car driver to try to beat the legendary Ferrari team.

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