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  1. Posted: October 22, 2019In: Historical

    A Russian immigrant is searching for the answers of her life in the assassination of Boris Nemtsov, the most feared of Putin?s adversaries. She is finding much more than she ever hoped for.

    Forgottencomposer Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 27, 2019 at 9:13 pm

    The connection between the immigrant's life and assassination of Nemtsov is unclear. Why is this topic important to her? What is her personal connection to Nemtsov's story? I think that making it clearer in the logline will attract more interest to the project.

    The connection between the immigrant’s life and assassination of Nemtsov is unclear. Why is this topic important to her? What is her personal connection to Nemtsov’s story? I think that making it clearer in the logline will attract more interest to the project.

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  2. Posted: June 16, 2017In: Historical

    A Caribbean D?butante en route to genteel refinement in Paris is hijacked to an Ottoman harem,…where life lessons far exceed anything she would have learned in school.

    henb Samurai
    Added an answer on August 31, 2019 at 10:23 pm

    Honestly, I had no idea what's being displayed in the first half of your logline after my first read-through due to the terminology you use. Try changing 'Debutante', 'genteel refinement', and 'Ottoman harem' to words more commonly understood. The second half of your logline: 'where life lessons farRead more

    Honestly, I had no idea what’s being displayed in the first half of your logline after my first read-through due to the terminology you use. Try changing ‘Debutante’, ‘genteel refinement’, and ‘Ottoman harem’ to words more commonly understood. The second half of your logline: ‘where life lessons far exceed anything she would have learned in school’ is great and piques my interest.

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  3. Posted: August 26, 2019In: Historical

    A young woman is challenged to write a horror story and ends up telling the story of her mother’s life. This is the new truth about Frankenstein.

    yqwertz Mentor
    Added an answer on August 26, 2019 at 7:26 pm

    Like? Richiev, not only am I not sure who the main characters is, I am not sure what their relationship is to "Frankenstein". The daughter of Mary Shelly, the author of Frankenstein, died in early childhood. And the wife of the fictional Victor Frankenstein died on her wedding night, so no daughter.Read more

    Like? Richiev, not only am I not sure who the main characters is, I am not sure what their relationship is to “Frankenstein”. The daughter of Mary Shelly, the author of Frankenstein, died in early childhood. And the wife of the fictional Victor Frankenstein died on her wedding night, so no daughter. What other mother-daughter pair is related to the Frankenstein story?

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