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  1. Posted: August 2, 2019In: Historical

    An enslaved Civil War era steamboat pilot, his family and his crew commandeer a Confederate steamer in a daring seven mile open water dash to Union freedom. – Based on a true story.

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2019 at 12:53 pm

    Maybe include the 'true story' bit at the beginning, if you can?? Based on a true story, an enslaved steamboat pilot commandeers a Confederate steamer during the Civil War in? a bid to steer his family to safety. Or similar. :) Sounds like a great story! I'd watch it, for sure.

    Maybe include the ‘true story’ bit at the beginning, if you can??

    Based on a true story, an enslaved steamboat pilot commandeers a Confederate steamer during the Civil War in? a bid to steer his family to safety.

    Or similar. 🙂

    Sounds like a great story! I’d watch it, for sure.

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  2. Posted: May 7, 2019In: Historical

    In the 1960?s, when her Greek village is devastated by drought, a teenage girl?s parents force her to migrate to Sydney Australia to marry a stranger and bring them prosperity but finds both racism and friendship, opportunities and mistreatment.

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    Added an answer on May 13, 2019 at 12:04 am

    That you have "too much" material is always a good thing, an indicator of a story's dramatic potential.BUT:>>>the story would have 4 lead female characters in different situations as migrant women in Australia in the 1960?s.IOW: you have in mind an ensemble story. I suggest combining and coRead more

    That you have “too much” material is always a good thing, an indicator of a story’s dramatic potential.
    BUT:
    >>>the story would have 4 lead female characters in different situations as migrant women in Australia in the 1960?s.

    IOW: you have in mind an ensemble story. I suggest combining and condensing into one protagonist, or dual protagonists at the most.? Having four separate co-equal characters and story threads in a feature film? can lead to truncated story lines (for want of time to adequately develop each story) diffused focus, and diluted emotional impact.

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  3. Posted: March 29, 2017In: Historical

    LITTLE EIFFEL – The improbable true story of how Gustave Eiffel fought against massive protests, construction fatalities, and structural issues to build the most visited monument on earth – The Eiffel Tower

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    Added an answer on May 11, 2019 at 7:19 pm

    Grabbed my attention straight away. My only question is why it was so important for him to build it - why made him keep fighting against the odds to finish it? Pride? Ambition? Passion?

    Grabbed my attention straight away. My only question is why it was so important for him to build it – why made him keep fighting against the odds to finish it? Pride? Ambition? Passion?

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