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  1. Posted: July 24, 2016In: Horror

    A French bisexual woman likes to sleep with her victims before she eats them. When the zombies attack, she is faced with a moral dilemma.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on July 25, 2016 at 11:52 am

    Agreed with all the above comments. Also, I would find it hard to empathise with a main character who eats people - humans or zombies she's a horrible person! What redeeming qualities does she have to make her a potentially likeable character, if possible that is, I just can't imagine it happening.

    Agreed with all the above comments.

    Also, I would find it hard to empathise with a main character who eats people – humans or zombies she’s a horrible person!

    What redeeming qualities does she have to make her a potentially likeable character, if possible that is, I just can’t imagine it happening.

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  2. Posted: July 17, 2016In: Horror

    Roseline is running to protect her way of life because of her unwanted unborn child. She finds a way to keep her world by making a deal with a cult to rid her of the child but unbeknownst to her, the child lives as a spirit. This spirit, Atlas, loves his mother but soon he finds the truth behind her actions and is sent spiraling into confusion and rage.

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    Added an answer on July 18, 2016 at 12:27 pm

    Loglines can serve as either a pitching tool or a structuring one. A common mistake many writers make (my past self included) is to jump strait to script with no prior structure work. If this is your preferred method so ?be it, however I find it far more efficient to "flesh out" a concept progressivRead more

    Loglines can serve as either a pitching tool or a structuring one.
    A common mistake many writers make (my past self included) is to jump strait to script with no prior structure work. If this is your preferred method so ?be it, however I find it far more efficient to “flesh out” a concept progressively from a logline to synopsis and then step outline before taking it to script. This way if the logline doesn’t work it exposes problems in the concept that need to be changed, and can save you a lot of time and energy – changing a logline is far quicker and easier than changing a script.

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  3. Posted: July 14, 2016In: Horror

    After her daughter is brutally assaulted and raped by a group of racist boys at school, a tough Vietnamese beautician seeks to torture the boys’ mothers at her beauty salon.

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    Added an answer on July 15, 2016 at 7:29 am

    Just add a motive for the torture and then tighten your wording."To avenge her daughter's rape by a racist classmate a Vietnamese woman abducts and tortures the boys mother."To avenge may be wrong. But rape always comes with the knowledge of brutality so you don't have to say that, words you get forRead more

    Just add a motive for the torture and then tighten your wording.

    “To avenge her daughter’s rape by a racist classmate a Vietnamese woman abducts and tortures the boys mother.”

    To avenge may be wrong. But rape always comes with the knowledge of brutality so you don’t have to say that, words you get for free.

    Hope it helps.

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