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A timid young man must protect his friends and himself when the psychopath who killed his father fifteen years ago escapes from an asylum transfer and sets out on a new murdering spree.
Halloween? Except killing the dad instead of the sister and you've switched to a male protagonist. Try to add some originality, what's your hook that made you MUST write this down and share it.
Halloween? Except killing the dad instead of the sister and you’ve switched to a male protagonist. Try to add some originality, what’s your hook that made you MUST write this down and share it.
See lessWhen corporate employees escaping a building blaze are machine-gunned down at the fire exit, a PR girl becomes trapped in a stairwell, and must outwit a deranged gunman.
I like this idea but there a few problems with your logline itself. Firstly, try and link everything as in: Why is the gunman targeting this building? Is it a bank that foreclosed on him? Secondly, your protagonist (not your situation) should be introduced first, and why should we sympathize with heRead more
I like this idea but there a few problems with your logline itself.
Firstly, try and link everything as in: Why is the gunman targeting this building? Is it a bank that foreclosed on him?
Secondly, your protagonist (not your situation) should be introduced first, and why should we sympathize with her? What’s her flaw?
See lessA French bisexual woman likes to sleep with her victims before she eats them. When the zombies attack, she is faced with a moral dilemma.
Agreed with all the above comments. Also, I would find it hard to empathise with a main character who eats people - humans or zombies she's a horrible person! What redeeming qualities does she have to make her a potentially likeable character, if possible that is, I just can't imagine it happening.
Agreed with all the above comments.
Also, I would find it hard to empathise with a main character who eats people – humans or zombies she’s a horrible person!
What redeeming qualities does she have to make her a potentially likeable character, if possible that is, I just can’t imagine it happening.
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