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  1. Posted: June 26, 2016In: Horror

    A young man, sets out to defend his hometown when the psycho, who 15 years ago killed the young mans father, escapes from the asylum to begin his new murdering spree.

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    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 28, 2016 at 12:07 am

    "Perhaps if the MC is in a wheel chair or agoraphobic his obstacle would make his story more interesting/original, or what if the killer had a unique method of berrying people alive so the MC has only a few days to find the victims before they suffocate." The fact that he's not a cop is what is theRead more

    “Perhaps if the MC is in a wheel chair or agoraphobic his obstacle would make his story more interesting/original, or what if the killer had a unique method of berrying people alive so the MC has only a few days to find the victims before they suffocate.”
    The fact that he’s not a cop is what is the challenge. He doesn’t have training, weapons, or resources to take on a seasoned killer. Giving him a disability would make the story less believable, because of his lack of training and disability combined. .
    It seems to differ in that it’s not a mystery at all; he knows who did it and is trying to stop him. He may have to figure out where he’s going and such, but as the genre is labelled ‘Horror’ it seems more horror than police procedural.
    Besides, it is similar to an established idea, the police procedural, yet it is different. While maybe you have run dry on standard police types(I don’t even watch procedural so I know how you feel), studios are still looking for them. It different enough to be a bit unique but familiar enough to probably not be considered a risk.
    I think making the killer unique is probably the way to go.?

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  2. Posted: June 25, 2016In: Horror

    A young man, traumatized by his father’s death, must face his past when an institutionalized psychotic murderer escapes and preys upon his hometown.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on June 26, 2016 at 2:15 pm

    Agreed with FFF and DPG, but also I can't see how the father's death relates to the plot, this description can be cut to free up, oh so precious, logline real-estate.

    Agreed with FFF and DPG, but also I can’t see how the father’s death relates to the plot, this description can be cut to free up, oh so precious, logline real-estate.

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  3. Posted: June 20, 2016In: Horror

    When a Hell-inspired horror theme park malfunctions, the park’s security chief must rescue thousands of visitors, including his daughter, as the attractions come to life and become Hell on Earth.

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    Added an answer on June 20, 2016 at 11:40 pm

    Does this occur on Halloween? ?That's the obvious time for people to go to a ?theme park on hell. ?(And the obvious time for the movie to be released.) The twist of the story is the park becomes literally hell on earth. ?Okay. ?However, I would like to see more irony. ?What if the person who must reRead more

    Does this occur on Halloween? ?That’s the obvious time for people to go to a ?theme park on hell. ?(And the obvious time for the movie to be released.)

    The twist of the story is the park becomes literally hell on earth. ?Okay. ?However, I would like to see more irony. ?What if the person who must rescue his daughter is the owner/designer of the park? ?What he built for his own amusement and profit has turned into his worst nightmare? ?What if he must save his daughter and redeem himself from his greed and hubris?

    fwiw

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