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A grieving mother uses ancient magic to resurrect her recently deceased daughter despite her own mother?s dire warnings resulting in deadly consequences for those closest to her.
Although I concur that the wording may be extraneous for the logline, I'm guessing the grandmother's warnings are central to the plot.? IOW:? they foreshadow the? dramatic problem the?mother is creating by raising her daughter.That's intuitively sound and comports with the mythology? paradigm:? everRead more
Although I concur that the wording may be extraneous for the logline, I’m guessing the grandmother’s warnings are central to the plot.? IOW:? they foreshadow the? dramatic problem the?mother is creating by raising her daughter.
That’s intuitively sound and comports with the mythology? paradigm:? every magical gift comes with a hefty price tag,?? with consequences that are?often ?foreseen — and always unheeded.? (Because if they were heeded, there wouldn’t be a story.)
Again, we need to know what the consequences?are of?raising her daughter.? That seems to be what the plot is about.
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Very funny!
Very funny!
See lessJohn Dillinger tangles with gunslingers and the undead in a lawless dust bowl town.
Agreed with DPG. Also the logline describes two potential antagonists the undead and a gunslinger, but which one will cause the most conflict and to that matter provide the last obstacle in act 3? That's the only one that should be in the logline.
Agreed with DPG.
Also the logline describes two potential antagonists the undead and a gunslinger, but which one will cause the most conflict and to that matter provide the last obstacle in act 3? That’s the only one that should be in the logline.
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