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300 years ago, the Penitente rose from the ashes of the Pueblo Revolts. Today Diana believes her family’s dark past has caught up to her when the body of a crucified man is found in the desert.
Hard to add any useful notes to the comments above. I would say that for me the logline is confusing and vague in its descriptions, I needed to read it twice to get an idea of the characters and their actions.
Hard to add any useful notes to the comments above.
See lessI would say that for me the logline is confusing and vague in its descriptions, I needed to read it twice to get an idea of the characters and their actions.
Failed documentarian roams the New Mexico mountain hunting a story until he stumbles onto a cult of women crucifying drug dealers to purge sin. He believes he’s found the story of a lifetime if he can live to tell it. Breaking Bad meets The Lottery.
It seems to me his initial?objective goal?should be?to find and document the cult -- he shouldn't just discover the women accidently. It doesn't make sense that he would be roaming a desolate, rugged?landscape hoping to stumble upon a story, any story.Rather he's been lured into the wilderness by ruRead more
It seems to me his initial?objective goal?should be?to find and document the cult — he shouldn’t just discover the women accidently. It doesn’t make sense that he would be roaming a desolate, rugged?landscape hoping to stumble upon a story, any story.
Rather he’s been lured into the wilderness by rumors of?the cult, and he thinks it would make a “killer”? subject for a documentary, one that will bring him critical acclaim and financial reward.
Well, it turns out to be a” killer”?subject — but not in the way he had expected.
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See lessA grieving mother uses ancient magic to resurrect her recently deceased daughter despite her own mother?s dire warnings resulting in deadly consequences for those closest to her.
Although I concur that the wording may be extraneous for the logline, I'm guessing the grandmother's warnings are central to the plot.? IOW:? they foreshadow the? dramatic problem the?mother is creating by raising her daughter.That's intuitively sound and comports with the mythology? paradigm:? everRead more
Although I concur that the wording may be extraneous for the logline, I’m guessing the grandmother’s warnings are central to the plot.? IOW:? they foreshadow the? dramatic problem the?mother is creating by raising her daughter.
That’s intuitively sound and comports with the mythology? paradigm:? every magical gift comes with a hefty price tag,?? with consequences that are?often ?foreseen — and always unheeded.? (Because if they were heeded, there wouldn’t be a story.)
Again, we need to know what the consequences?are of?raising her daughter.? That seems to be what the plot is about.
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