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  1. Posted: January 16, 2016In: Horror

    When two wealthy teenage brothers move into a small town, one of them tries to seduce a local girl. While the girl’s brother, after witnessing their strange behaviors such as acute sensitivity to sunlight and religious icons, lists the help of his friends to prove that the two brothers are Vampires in disguise.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on January 17, 2016 at 2:38 pm

    Agreed with Richiev also better to specify a clear and challenging outer goal. If the main character is the new guy in town (suspected vampire) then his goal is to get the girl because he is in love with her, this is as appose to just seducing her. If the main character is the girl's brother then hiRead more

    Agreed with Richiev also better to specify a clear and challenging outer goal.

    If the main character is the new guy in town (suspected vampire) then his goal is to get the girl because he is in love with her, this is as appose to just seducing her. If the main character is the girl’s brother then his goal should be more than just to prove the guy is a vampire, perhaps he needs to run the new guy?out of town or kill him.

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  2. Posted: January 15, 2016In: Horror

    Suffering from hallucinations and sleep paralysis, an American exchange student studying abroad in Tokyo discovers that he has become host to a fox spirit responsible for a series of attacks that vary from mischief to malice.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 17, 2016 at 12:40 pm

    Saying the lead is an American exchange student, and then saying he is studying abroad, is redundant. ----- When an American exchange student in Tokyo discovers he's become host to a fox spirit, he must... (Then tell us what he must do)

    Saying the lead is an American exchange student, and then saying he is studying abroad, is redundant.
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    When an American exchange student in Tokyo discovers he’s become host to a fox spirit, he must… (Then tell us what he must do)

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  3. Posted: November 18, 2015In: Horror

    A disgraced PR Fixer reluctantly unites with the ghost of his perverted first guest to save his families Hotel from being demolished.

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    Added an answer on December 1, 2015 at 12:20 am

    Hello, maybe you could?include in the logline how the main character and the ghost can save the hotel.

    Hello,
    maybe you could?include in the logline how the main character and the ghost can save the hotel.

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