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An archeologist’s family struggles to stay alive, after a failed expedition in the remote jungles of the Amazon awakens a supposed extinct, cannibalistic humanoid that terrorizes and hunts them, one by one.
An inciting incident would give the story a starting point and add legitimacy to the creature's vengeful tendencies.E.g: After disrupting the tomb of an ancient beast an archaeologist must fight a cannibalistic humanoid to get his family safely out of the Amazon.Hope this helps.
An inciting incident would give the story a starting point and add legitimacy to the creature’s vengeful tendencies.
E.g:
After disrupting the tomb of an ancient beast an archaeologist must fight a cannibalistic humanoid to get his family safely out of the Amazon.
Hope this helps.
See lessAfter a government lab accidentally unleashes an experimental virus, a suburban mom must struggle against her timid nature and a horde of mutated neighbors as she races to rescue her kids from certain death.
This sounds like a zombie cross family drama movie. When dealing with genre movies best to specify this, you can't describe a zombie movie and expect people no to pick up on it. So if you are writing a zombie movie embrace and celebrate it by outright declaring what it is. The zombie genre has beenRead more
This sounds like a zombie cross family drama movie. When dealing with genre movies best to specify this, you can’t describe a zombie movie and expect people no to pick up on it. So if you are writing a zombie movie embrace and celebrate it by outright declaring what it is.
The zombie genre has been done to death (pardon the pun…) so I suppose a fresh take via a not yet seen genre cross over could work.
Only things that really jump out as problems are a logic flaw and character descriptions.
“…a suburban mom must struggle against her timid nature…” is a longer way of saying – timid mother, so best to employ more economy in the character description, in that sense brevity = impact.
Secondly after she gets her kids, then what? Where will they go for safety? How will they fend off the zombies? The concept reads like act 1 and half of act 2 but lacks the climax which according to the genre needs to be the MC’s reaching a safe haven so best to add in a description of the final safe place they will go to.
Hope this helps.
See lessWhen a lab experiment goes horribly wrong, a clumsy scientist and his two pretty female assistants become the first highly intelligent zombies. Not willing to share their newly found powers with the knowledge hungry human elite that forcefully tries to get bitten, they barricade themselves in their research facility trying to find a cure for their own uncontrollable hunger and bad looks, before turning on themselves. But cure or no cure ? they still have to find a way out!
Yes Craig, I think it can ony be a black comedy.?But I think when?everybody gets powers there is no conflict. And when there is no conflict there is no story.
Yes Craig, I think it can ony be a black comedy.?But I think when?everybody gets powers there is no conflict. And when there is no conflict there is no story.
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