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After a government lab accidentally unleashes an experimental virus, a suburban mom must struggle against her timid nature and a horde of mutated neighbors as she races to rescue her kids from certain death.
This sounds like a zombie cross family drama movie. When dealing with genre movies best to specify this, you can't describe a zombie movie and expect people no to pick up on it. So if you are writing a zombie movie embrace and celebrate it by outright declaring what it is. The zombie genre has beenRead more
This sounds like a zombie cross family drama movie. When dealing with genre movies best to specify this, you can’t describe a zombie movie and expect people no to pick up on it. So if you are writing a zombie movie embrace and celebrate it by outright declaring what it is.
The zombie genre has been done to death (pardon the pun…) so I suppose a fresh take via a not yet seen genre cross over could work.
Only things that really jump out as problems are a logic flaw and character descriptions.
“…a suburban mom must struggle against her timid nature…” is a longer way of saying – timid mother, so best to employ more economy in the character description, in that sense brevity = impact.
Secondly after she gets her kids, then what? Where will they go for safety? How will they fend off the zombies? The concept reads like act 1 and half of act 2 but lacks the climax which according to the genre needs to be the MC’s reaching a safe haven so best to add in a description of the final safe place they will go to.
Hope this helps.
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Yes Craig, I think it can ony be a black comedy.?But I think when?everybody gets powers there is no conflict. And when there is no conflict there is no story.
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I don't get the premise either.?I?am familiar? with ?the Biblical reference and I vaguely understand (I think) what you are trying to do.? But I'm not sure.??What is the cause-and effect relationship between Lazarus and a Roman centurion and the Jews and new Christian sect?
I don’t get the premise either.?I?am familiar? with ?the Biblical reference and I vaguely understand (I think) what you are trying to do.? But I’m not sure.??What is the cause-and effect relationship between Lazarus and a Roman centurion and the Jews and new Christian sect?
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