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  1. Posted: October 14, 2015In: Horror

    After Lazarus? resurrection, a Roman centurion must rule the Jewish and a new-born rebel sect to contain the spread of the living-deads.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 17, 2015 at 1:05 pm

    I don't get the premise either.?I?am familiar? with ?the Biblical reference and I vaguely understand (I think) what you are trying to do.? But I'm not sure.??What is the cause-and effect relationship between Lazarus and a Roman centurion and the Jews and new Christian sect?

    I don’t get the premise either.?I?am familiar? with ?the Biblical reference and I vaguely understand (I think) what you are trying to do.? But I’m not sure.??What is the cause-and effect relationship between Lazarus and a Roman centurion and the Jews and new Christian sect?

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  2. Posted: October 14, 2015In: Horror

    An insecure prison doctor cooks up misfortune for inmates when she discovers a desire to care for burn victims.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 14, 2015 at 10:53 am

    The doctor will need at least one redeeming characteristic because other wise she is a nasty person with no clear motivation other wise give her a noble reason perhaps she is experimenting to find a miracle burns treatment. Hope this helps.

    The doctor will need at least one redeeming characteristic because other wise she is a nasty person with no clear motivation other wise give her a noble reason perhaps she is experimenting to find a miracle burns treatment.

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: October 11, 2015In: Horror

    When a lonely woman get bitten by a mysterious werewolf one late night she needs to find the person who did it to find out how to break the spell before she herself turns into a monster.

    FFF Mentor
    Added an answer on October 12, 2015 at 7:35 pm

    I agree about cutting "mysterious": it means nothing. I would cut "one late night" too because it's not relevant to the plot. I would cut "the person", in a logline the shorter the better.

    I agree about cutting “mysterious”: it means nothing.
    I would cut “one late night” too because it’s not relevant to the plot.
    I would cut “the person”, in a logline the shorter the better.

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